Commentary, part four.

[sarcasticsra]

Hello from Florida! It's sunny and lovely here. We're visiting my aunt and cousins over Christmas. Fun times!

Two more for the commentary meme! I wrote these out on the plane ride, lol.

Comments

[subluxate]

I love "Moments". It's so fun, and I will never not lol at Johnny's song, okay, way too perfect.

Leo...you fucked up bad. Not only did you severely injure a four-year-old, but god, pissing off Lea. Baaaad move. But I like the metaphor! Nicely done there.

[sarcasticsra]

I love it, lol.

I realized that's what it was as I was writing the commentary--that kind of three strikes, you're out sort of attitude. It was pretty interesting to me.

[sunsetsinthewes]

I looooove your commentary for Moments-- hilarious, and well, I just love it.
I love the fic, too, for pretty much every reason you detailed here. Like Gina Sophia being adorable (I did indeed tell you that bit about the coffee-- she plans, like, her entire day around going to get coffee because she has such a crush), and Vito's honesty, and David being a Mama's boy and annoying Johnny, and Romeo and Stef needing hugs, and I could keep going forever. :p

LEO SUCKS SO HARD, OMG, LET HIM DIIIIIIIIIE.

Daria makes me shudder but Leo, ugh. Just death, please. Lots of death for him.

[sarcasticsra]

I had fun with the commentary for Moments! Also writing Moments in general.

LEO SERIOUSLY SUCKS UGH. Hate forever.

[bookblather]

Yeah, Leo... really deserved everything he got, and frankly the fact that Lea was debating whether or not to kill him should be a serious wakeup call.

Also, Moments is AMAZING and Hollaback Girl for Johnny will never not be amazing.

[sarcasticsra]

Well, he doesn't do anything of that magnitude again, so maybe it did, kinda? Idk. Either way, Leo SUCKS.

I love that song choice for him so much. XD