Guardian Angel - NC17 - Chapter Three

[sarcastic_fina]

Title: Guardian Angel
Category: Smallville/Batman (Crossover)
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Pairing: Chloe/Bruce Wayne
Word Count: 1,733
Summary: Her guardian angel was a dark man with a fetish for rodents. Figures.

Previous: Chapter One, Chapter Two

Comments

[svgurl]

This story is just so much fun! I love Chloe finding the perfect dress and the saleslady telling her it was meant for her. Plus, it's BLACK. That's just awesome. :)

The Clark-Chloe conversation was hilarious. I love the way you portray their friendship and Clark's overprotectiveness.

She laughed. "Agreed. But I'm okay and while I know Gotham isn't Superman's playing ground, I'm sure he'll show up if I ever need him." She smiled lightly.

"Of course he will," he said gently, reassuring.

"When he's not wrapped up in Lois Lane, of course."

He paused. "What does your entirely too stubborn for her own good cousin have to do with anything?"

That was so funny. Clark and Lois ... they have an interesting relationship, to say the least. Chloe drawing out his feelings was so cool.

And the end, with the Chloe-Batman banter ... perfect. I'm still so excited for her to meet Bruce and vice versa!

Fantastic job! I'm completely addicted to this story!

[electricmonk333]

""And she's always calling me Smallville! How many years has it been? Does she have to talk to me like I'm a stray who wanders into her life from time to time?""

Best line! Can't find a single fault with the way the story is enfolding and the character interactions. Simply love it!

[ladygawain]

I absolutely adore the way you write Chloe! The chemistry between her and the caped crusader is off the charts, I love it. Also, loving how clueless Clark and Lois are as to their mutual attraction - very cute.