be us against the world - t - olicity - part 6 [c]

[sarcastic_fina]

title: we keep all our promises (be us against the world)
category: arrow
genre: drama/romance
chapter rating: pg-13/teen
overall rating: nc-17/explicit
inspiration: gif (source)
word count: 12,189
summary: [au - no island] Oliver Queen has no idea what he's doing with his life, but when his father gives him an ultimatum, he has to figure it out.

Comments

[poeticsoul14]

You're just too awesome for words and this story is so so so amazing. Seeing a glimpse of sweet, little Oliver with his grandfather was so tender and cute. I really enjoyed you including that tidbit of Oliver's relationship with his father. I love that you had Felicity confess her conversation with Robert to Oliver because it really shows Oliver how much she cares about him and believes in him. Also it reminds me of her telling Oliver about his Moira's secret in the last episode, so it really goes along with her character. It was cute to see some interaction between Oliver and Thea. It might just be me, but I feel like Oliver and Thea interaction has not made much of an appearance. I know the focus is on Oliver's growth and development, but I really enjoyed seeing those little moments between the siblings. As for the ending, I actually really enjoyed it. Yeah it sucks that Oliver made this mistake in acting impulsively with Felicity and kind of put Felicity in this situation where she's the other woman. But the fact that he