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i want you so bad - nc-17 - 1/1 [c]

Jan 27, 2014 05:56

title: I know I don't know you (but I want you so bad)
category: arrow
genre: romance/humor
ship: felicity/oliver
rating: nc-17/explicit
polyvore: outfit collection, lingerie
word count: 17,677
summary: (au) Oliver runs into his high school crush, Felicity Smoak, at a charity gala and he finally gets his chance to win the girl of his dreams.

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ship: oliver/felicity, oneshot - arrow - olicity, author: sarcastic_fina, fic: i want you so bad, status: complete, rating: nc17

Comments 8

sandy1024 January 27 2014, 16:45:57 UTC

I Loved that Oliver was a lovesick fool too. It shows that anyone can he a fool when they are falling in love. My favorite part was when everyone was making fun for him. His mom taking credit is what any mother would do. I enjoyed this au. Thanks for posting it.

sanaazzy January 27 2014, 20:44:02 UTC

Oh Lee, I've missed you! I'm sorry i haven't been around but looking at all the updates and new fics - I can't say i feel too bad about it.
And this little gem, just fabulous! I love the easy flow between all the characters (the re-telling of all his embarrassing moments regarding her), your depiction of both Oliver and Felicity - she's a go-getter and not shy about what she wants. Confident and fabulous! I love it!

purple_moon123 January 27 2014, 21:39:49 UTC

Loved it. Love sick Oliver that can't get a word out and who could forget the puking, is just to hilarious.
Ohhh the stories that Adelaide is going to hear about his dad.

calliope1975 January 27 2014, 21:58:14 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this. Having Oliver as the one chasing someone was nice as was his complete ineptness at it. And the sexy times were super hot! I love your AUs.

lionhearted_21 January 28 2014, 00:31:29 UTC

This is awesome on so many levels! I love how mercilessly Tommy, Thea, Moira, and even Laurel were teasing Oliver. It was hilarious! They all just bounced ideas off of each other and I could so easily imagine Oliver groaning with embarrassment while hoping Felicity wouldn't hear any of it. It was a really fun change of pace to see Oliver as unsure of himself and Felicity confident as hell. :)

Also, I completely adore you for adding Digg as Felicity's bodyguard! It's kind of like a modern version of their relationship in the medieval au (which is fantastic btw).

So basically this story is all kinds of awesome. You did an amazing job (like always). :D