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Of Love and Friendship - NC17 - Chlollie- Part Twenty-Eight (2/2)

Nov 26, 2010 22:33

Title: Of Love and Friendship
Category: Smallville
Genre: Friendship/Romance/Humor/Action/Drama
Ship: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 8,437
Spoiler(s): 6x07 - Rage
Summary: (AU) Chloe Sullivan grew up in Star City, California with high hopes of becoming a Pulitzer Prize winning reporter, but destiny has other plans. Finding a best friend in ( Read more... )

novel - smallville - chlollie, author: sarcastic_fina, ship: chloe/oliver, fic: of love & friendship

Comments 48

great anonymous November 27 2010, 08:11:52 UTC

please keep on updating... Im hooked... great job by the way... please update soon... Happy thanksgiving... :)

sjww November 27 2010, 08:58:42 UTC

this story is so awesome yet another great chapter- In this chapter I loved the way you bought Ollie out of the darkness with Chloe and her realising she may need to use other people to help, then bringing them together as a family at thanksgiving not to mention the build up of the friendship into more for Chloe/Ollie :)

Really really great job on this fic- cant wait for the next chapter!

(I know that when this story comes to an end the first thing Im going to do is grab a hot chocolate or two and read from start to finish! - Thank you for taking the time to write and post

insanityclings November 27 2010, 10:34:53 UTC

Stayed up way later than I should have to read this but it was so awesomely worth it. I love the way you handled his drug storyline and the family atmosphere at the end. I'm so glad he finally admitted to himself that he's in love with her, I hope he stops worrying he's not good enough for her soon, and that Chloe manages to pull her head out of the sand and see she's madly in love with him too (so that we can finally get some smutty goodness :D ).

isdon_isgood9 November 27 2010, 11:05:25 UTC

Yes!!! Another update!!!!!!!

Ok, now the squealing is over I have a couple of things to say, thankfully they're all good : )

Firstly, I know I've said it before but the way your playing Clark in this is just brilliant. I love the way Chloe's opinion of him changes depending on what he's doing and I love how Clark seem to think he's right going to Chloe when there's something wrong with Oliver but doesn't listen when she tells him to back off.

Next the emotions you dragged from this episode are astounding. I wish I had the ability to write and play with them the way you do in this. One minute I'm laughing, then I'm crying then I'm angry, it's like I'm on the emotional rollercoaster that they're on at the same time.

Finally I'm very glad that Oliver has finally realised how deep his love for Chloe does run and that he had the good sense not to mention it.

Now for a couple of little things - I love the title for the next chapter, especially the confusing feelings part, and I can't wait to see where you take it. I still love the fact ( ... )

jediyoda99 November 27 2010, 13:20:10 UTC

Finally Oliver has admitted it. He has finally seen it. Now we are just waiting for one cute bond sidekick...

They are already acting out like a couple so why not make it like officially. Oliver needs to step up his game and try to make the little blond see what is infront of her and make her see that what she is looking for is there infront of her all along.