When Forever Comes - PG - Chloe/Bart - OneShot

Oct 13, 2010 21:26


Title: When Forever Comes
Category: Smallville
Genre: Romance
Ship: Chloe/Bart
Rating: PG
For: selene2 
Word Count: 715
Summary: He'll always be there, waiting for her… Won't he?
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fic: when forever comes, oneshot - smallville - chlart, for: selene2, author: sarcastic_fina, ship: chloe/bart, status: complete

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selene2 October 14 2010, 04:51:58 UTC
*falls down dead*

This is the bestest day ev-vah! The Chlart love is in full effect. I am now going to have to go re-read all of your Chlart. *is super happy* Thank you so much. I absolutely loved it!

*hugs tight*

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purple_moon123 October 14 2010, 04:56:03 UTC
Ohhh Chlart how I love thee!!!!

This was super sweet and just so awesome!!!

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svgurl October 14 2010, 04:57:32 UTC
Chlart and Chlo-Lo in one day ... and by one of my favorite writers at that. Life is good! Your Bart is so adorable. I just want to squish him. His pure adoration and genuine love for Chloe never fails to make me smile. You're so great at expressing that through words, just by the way he brings her her favorite flower and knows how she takes her coffee.

She glanced at him, sobering. "You sure you can stay still that long?" Did she hear a note of worry in her voice? No, of course not… Except, she did.

And it seems that Chloe is not as unaffected as she likes to pretend either. Aww, Chloe, you know you're the only woman for Bart! It's good that he reassured her too. The last line was just the perfect ending.

Wonderful job!

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citymusings October 14 2010, 05:07:54 UTC
You wrote more Chlart! This pleases me. ;) It's sweet that she's his first stop. And he's right - she will stop running.

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nienna87 October 14 2010, 08:26:46 UTC
Yay! I love Chloe/Bart, especially the way you write them. Its so good and always makes me smile. This was so sweet and cute! Loved it!

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nienna87 October 15 2010, 02:28:34 UTC
it makes me smile too :D

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