The Heart of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Ten

[sarcastic_fina]

Title: The Heart of Fate
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: My Bloody Valentine, Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid, (Season 5)
Word Count: 7,048
Summary: With a little help from Cupid, Dean gets exactly what he needs.

Previous: Prologue, Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three, Chapter Four, Chapter

Comments

[coolbeanie]

I have NO IDEA what you have planned for this story. All I know is that I love it! After watching the season finale today, I knew I just had to see if you updated. And you did! Thank you! The finale was insane and awesome! Great job with this chapter. I'm so happy you have it all mapped out and updates will be frequent. Honestly, knowing that I can get a daily dose of Supernatural and Chloe is SO EXCITING and thrilling!

[sarcastic_fina]

haha, well I'm glad I'm not predictable!
After watching the finale, I mapped out what I was going to do for it in this story immediately. It's actually really helped me to see exactly where I'm going and I don't see this story bottoming out early. I'll get it to the end.
haha, Well I'm glad I could provide the Chloe/SPN fix for you!

[leafairy124]

Action packed chapter! Loved it bunches! Poor Bobby though, how heartbreaking to have to kill his wife, and twice too. *sniffles*

I'm really liking the growing relationship between Chloe and Dean and how much they're beginning to mean to each other. Loved how worried/frantic Dean was when he couldn't find Chloe and how he used his body to protect her. Aww. Lovely.

Anyhoo, amazing work as always! I look forward to reading more! Thanks so much for updating!!

[sarcastic_fina]

I really felt for Bobby this episode and writing it out, adding the emotions unsaid, that doubled it.
I'm enjoying writing their progress. From Dean as the guy who was hating on Fate to the guy who's kind of thankful for what it brought him, but all the while wondering when it will be snatched away. It's sad but sweet.
Glad you're enjoying it. Another update will be up soon!

[scwlc]

Well, congratulations on getting through the episode rewrite. That was heartrending and perfect and pretty much seamless in how you added Chloe in. Great job.

[sarcastic_fina]

It took a *very* long time to write this one out. There was so much going on and poor Bobby... *sigh*
Thank you! I'm really glad Chloe fit, when I was writing it I wasn't sure, but I'm glad she was able to step into it all seamlessly from the reader's point of view!

[fireylight88]

whoa, quick update! This really made my day - I absolutely love your writing style. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more Chlean lovin! ;)

[sarcastic_fina]

haha, I saw the season finale of Supernatural and I *had* to update!
Aw, thank you! That's very flattering!
Update to come soon!

[purple_moon123]

As much as I love the SPN I love your version better!!!

And the kiss!!! Oh dear was it hot!!!!

[sarcastic_fina]

Wow, now *that* is a compliment!

They have some awesome chemistry, huh? I think it's great given they're not even on the same show but I can honestly see them having this epic heat between them. They make it easy to write! :)