sarcastic_fina's Seven Sinful Ships - M15 - Lois/Clark

[sarcastic_fina]

Title: Seven Sins
Series: sarcastic_fina's Seven Sinful Ships
Category: Smallville
Word Count: 1,388
Ship: Clark/Lois
Sin: Lust
Summary: There was something appealing about him; and it wasn't the plaid...

Comments

[ancarett]

What a great Lois PoV on all of this. Yes, she would come into it all pragmatic and planned in her impulsiveness, but I love how it takes her by surprise:

Had somebody asked her to write a story on it, there'd be no words to explain it. It was beyond description.

She felt loved.

[babettew54]

Oh, Your Clois was very hot, indeed! So in character, no talking during and afterwards! I loved Lois' denial..!! *Perfect* Good job!!:D

[carolandtom]

This was really hot. I love your description of Lois' feelings for Clark and that he took her home and they both pretended it never happened. But I'm afraid Lois would have to be the one to make the next move because Clark needs to be sure she really knows what she wants.

Great writing!

[adja999]

AWESOME!!!!!!

I so want that in the show.

I'm so going to pray that what's going to happen when she gets back.

Nicely written too.

[muppet_puppet]

Ditto that! :D

[scifiabby]

Man I love these two so much. Awesome job on the fic. Loved it