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5 Times Dean Knew He was Totally In Love With Chloe - NC17 - Part V

Oct 28, 2008 13:34

Title: Five Times Dean Knew He was Totally In Love With Chloe
Category: Smallville/Supernatural (Crossover)
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairing: Chloe/Dean
Word Count: 1,158
Series: Five Times Chlean ( 5 Times Chloe Knew Dean Was In Love With Her, 5 Reasons Sam Knows Chloe Is Perfect For Dean, 5 Times Lois Knew Dean Was IT For Chloe)
Summary: Much as ( Read more... )

fic: 5 times dean loved chloe, crossover: supernatural/smallville, author: sarcastic_fina, series: five times chlean, ship: chloe/dean, status: complete

Comments 17

svgurl October 28 2008, 20:47:31 UTC

OMG! That was awesome! Chloe wins at life! I loved her waking Dean and Sam up. That conversation was hilarious.

She rolled her eyes before grabbing a bag and searching through it. "Here. Wear this."

He frowned at the clothes but took them anyway. "You know, I know I proposed, but I didn't think naggy-wife would come out for awhile."

She didn't even bother to glare at him. "Mouth closed. Clothes on. And get moving," she ordered

LMAO!

She stole the Impala for him! Aww, now that's love! Those two are just so cute and you write them very well. They're so perfect for each other.

I loved this series from start to finish.

Wonderful job!

How...how... cold_queen_5 October 28 2008, 21:02:11 UTC

...Winchester of her. ROFL. Love it.

pen37 October 28 2008, 21:07:32 UTC

LOL! Perfect!

adella23 October 28 2008, 21:25:30 UTC

Perfect ending to a perfect story.

I am Glad You are baack. Livejournal was not the same without You.

shanna9064 October 28 2008, 22:39:40 UTC

Oh good Lord, I'm dying here. I figured the finale would be something like this. I even possibly pictured her making Ollie buy the car back and give it to them as a wedding present, but this is so much better.

Of course I love the Chlean interaction, but what killed me were the sleepy Sam parts.

"Seriously? Dress faster, Sam!"

He sighed. "But I've got really long legs..." he whined, falling back to the bed with a sleepy pout.

and this

Chloe sighed loudly. "Guys? I wasn't kidding. Sam? Pants?"

"What? They're on..." He stood up to show her.

"Shoes? Socks?"

He frowned, shoulders slumping before he moved to find the rest of his things.

I can just picture him giving that whole pouty little boy look.

The whole thing was adorable.