Guardian Angel - NC17 - Chloe/Bruce - Chapter Ten

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Title: Guardian Angel
Category: Smallville/Batman (Crossover)
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Pairing: Chloe/Bruce Wayne
Word Count: 1,398
Summary: Her guardian angel was a dark man with a fetish for rodents. Figures.

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Comments

[alexis374]

gasp - it's like Christmas Day with all these faaabulous updates! i'm especially excited about this one though because i love this series, and what an awesome update. a private first date definitely suits the two of them instead of some big and flashy event. and loved the bruce-alfred moment, very sweet. alfred is like a Yoda or something... so wise. anyways, two enthusiastic thumbs up!

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Fantastic update! Your muses are really working overtime and I'm super grateful for that! :D

I loved Alfred and Bruce's talking. I loved Alfred helping Bruce what to wear and Bruce's reaction to Alfred and Chloe shopping together.

Chloe freaking and almost backing out only to be stopped by Lois's message was perfect. Lois really knows her cousin too well! And Clark's just overprotective. At least Lois is there!

"Stop encouraging her, Lois!" Clark's voice could be heard in the background. "If she doesn't want to go out with him-"

"Stick a sock in it, Smallville. Just because you're a reborn virgin, doesn't mean we all have to twiddle our thumbs for a little fun!"

LMAO! I love Lois and Clark's arguing. And you always nail Lois's character perfectly. :)

Their date has started out very well! I can't wait to read more about it.

Wonderful job!

[angelbsb]

that was brillant . loved how lois called her and the way clark was acting. loved alfred talking to bruce and telling him to take a chance . PPMS

[kyra_and_co]

hey!! What I prefer in this one?! LOIS!! I don't believe it!! ^^
but she is funny, hilarious, adorable, I love her retorts, the banter with the poor Clark,:) I LOVED the call.
It's really strange for me to see Bruce like that, so...nervous, (girly way), no brooding. He's touching.

the chruce is still not my favorite pairing for chloe but I appreciate this fic.
Thanks for the update

[shiverslala]

YEAH! my guilty pleasure has been indulge thanks! lol I love Alfred, he's us in a way, almost omniscient and super cool (why yes, we ARE, right? lol)

Lois and Clark are the best duo ever here lol (I actually like your Lois, how chocking seeing how I always want to choke Erica Durance, whatever)

And imagining Christian Bale holding Alison Mack's hand just made my day lol

(have a great week-end btw!)