Title: Awesome Us Time
Category: Smallville
Rating: T
Genre: Family/Romance
Pairing: Chloe/Bart, some Clark/Lois
Word Count: 2,884
Prompt: Fulfillment by shopgal08
Summary: Chloe returns home to find Bart has a surprise evening planned for them.
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Comments 4
Lois and Clark as babysitters was fabulous. Your Lois kicks butt as usual.
"Where's my favorite man?" Lois exclaimed in greeting.
Playfully, Bart opened his arms to her. "I missed you too, cousin-in-law."
She rolled her eyes, scoffing as she bumped his shoulder and walked right past him to hurry over to Chloe, running her fingers through Christopher's hair. "There you are," she said, grinning. "I'd have been here sooner, little man, but your geeky uncle Clark couldn't get his butt in gear already."
"Hey! Quit telling him things like that or he's gonna grow up thinking I'm lame." Clark frowned at her.
The dialogue cracked me up.
Your characters are perfect and so true to the show.
Wonderful job!
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