TPE: Wild Card 2/?

[sarcastic_fi]

Fandom: NCIS
Title: TPE: Wild Card
Pairing: eventually Gibbs/DiNozzo, DiNozzo/OMCs, DiNozzo/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM, allusions to underage sex, allusions to child neglect/abuse, prostitution, D/s, mention of suicide.
Disclaimer: Belongs to Donald Bellisario. Not me!
Summary: DiNozzo's past catches up with him when his sordid secrets are directly

Comments

[laura_trekkie]

Huh, so Senior isn't the suspect? That doesn't automatically make him an innocent bystander, though... How did his name get on the hotel register?

And just what does Fornell know about Tony's life pre-NCIS? Is there any way of keeping those two lives separate for Tony? Will Gibbs get to the bottom of it all?

Laura.

Oh, p.s. My two pennies on the spelling issue- I'm also British and I write NCIS and other American fandoms. I personally stick to UK spellings throughout and UK words except in dialogue. Most readers are able to 'translate' with no problem, just like I got used to reading about faucets and sidewalks. I find that concentrating too much on an 'alien' way of spelling etc. takes the focus away from actually telling the story. No one really cares if colour has a 'u' in it or not if the story is interesting *vbg*. Hope that helps.

[natasha_alexis]

This premise is new and interesting, and I'm looking forward to more of the story.

I am really pleased to see you writing Daddy DiNozzo as less than a slippery con man and more of the creep we all took him to be before the revisionist version appeared in the person of Robert Wagner. Not that I don't adore Robert Wagner, I do, but Daddy DiNozzo left his kid in a hotel room in Honolulu, disowned him at 12 and shipped him off to boarding school, where he promptly forgot all about him. Can you tell I don't like the character?

As to the British word usage and spelling, no problem at all. Several of our very talented NCIS writers are British or Australian or one of the other countries that actually speaks proper English. We have been introduced to proper English gradually, so it should not produce culture shock in any of your readers.

Thanks for the update and looking forward to more of the story.

n_a

[aussie_mel]

This is really good. I can't wait to see more. Have you continued this anywhere? I would love to see the rest. I hope you continue with this as it is a great fic.