The Secret Life (Family) of John Sheppard 1a/?

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Title: The Secret Life (Family) of John Sheppard: official Chaper One
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: PG-15 for language
Word Count: Chapter One only = 5,793
Genre: Series, Angst, AU
Link to all parts: Previous Short Stories & future entries
Summary: Set between The Seige Part 3 and The Intruder: Rodney hasn't seen John Sheppard - co-father

Comments

[rissabby]

“Yes, but see your promise would have meant so much more before you skipped out on me and your offspring. Now you’re going to have to work for our trust,”

hee hee. Go, Rodney!

I was glad that you put so much emphasis on the problems between John and his family. As I said in a previous comment, I'm pretty mad at John, so I'm happy that Rodney is too.

I don't have time to read part b right now, but I'll be back on LJ later tonight.