Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-?x?-chap 4/?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!

(sorry for not adding Kai and Hiroto in this one, but believe me, in the next chaps they'll have a big part, this chap was easily getting too long if I would have add them too ><;)

!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of

Comments

[golden_kimono]

This confused me.. That's not a bad thing, though. :P It'll just make me read the rest. Not sure what else to say. ^^; I liked it; the part with Miyavi made me laugh. Poor Tora, having to deal with him. :P

[sarcasm_chan]

yeah sorry for making it so vague ^^;; if I would have explained everything, then A) the chap would have become 20 pages long, and B) the story had ended now XD;;;
I still hope you liked it ^^;;

[golden_kimono]

Yeah, I liked it! ^^ And I understand the vagueness, giving everything away so soon is.. well, not good. :P Besides, I get confused very easily. ^^;

[silver_tears382]

unyaaa~~~ X3~~~~~~~~

I'm so dissappointed..XD;; it's too short!!! >_< but great one ^o^~
Miyavi's so cute there =3~ and Saga X_X kakoiiii!
great chapz dear <3~ *gives chocolates* lovin' it even more! >D

Continue pleaseeee T_T

[sarcasm_chan]

yaay me is happy that you liked it, this kinda makes my day X3...or ends it cause I am off to bed XD;

^^ Saga? XD; well heis quite special in the story XD; and Myv is always cute ^^;; at least, most of the time, sometimes he isn't/
*CHOCOLATE! =D*

I will ^^ ASAP

[yomi_chan]

Finally fucking LJ is working again for me ... gnah! >_>''

Uhuhuuu~ it's getting interesting and mysterious >3~
But is it just me, or is it a bit shorter than your other parts? At least it seems so X.x'
Well whatever! I truly liked it and can't wait for more - as always <3333
*hehe*
And the Miyavi part was hilarious >3

(And sorry, I didn't response at MSN, because I fell asleep again ;__;''')

[sarcasm_chan]

yeah it was a bit shorter, but well, those others were quite long o.o; so XD;
I am happy you liked it =D
especially you liking the Myv part cause I thought you would not like that, cause you said you don't like him that much ^^;;
glad you do like it X3

(lol, doesn't matter, and reading that line made me laugh XD; it sound quite goofy)

[yomi_chan]

ha! I knew it >D' ... yeah, that's true, but you know my opinion ^^
Not liking him much ... nah. I completely dislike him, but you wrote it extremely funny and that's why I like it ^-^
*hands you a bunch of cookies*
(I'll definitely will bake some next week and I'll send you some >D'')

(That's mean ._.' ... I'm just exhausted T___T')

[ahega]

yeah, I read the last part(for now) too

I swear, this would be the kind of book I'd buy! I t reminds me of the old Robin Hood Anime (especially the scene where Tora was kidnapping the others.

Reita seems really so foolish about the world outside. Aw ♥~

Can't wait to get some Kai/Hiroto action in the next chap |3 besides that I developed some theories while reading.

First) the betrayer of the sea. I guess, since you mentioned in your description that his eyes are looking like the ocean (sth among those lines) and the fact, he's smiling a friendly smile which is not true are the source for his name. You are betrayed by his eyes.

Second) I guess Saga trusted Kai and surely was betrayed by him. Maybe Miyavi warned him.

I wonder what Uruha requested... maybe to find a companion so Saga may would accept is emotions..

ah~ dunno why I'm speculating xD'' and I'm sorry if this is bothering you .___.'' (I just can't sleep and writing calms me down xD'')

Anyway,hope to get to read a new chap soon!♥

[sarcasm_chan]

and again, Thank you! this is probably one of the nicest comments I had up till now XD;;

no i'm not bothered by your speculations, the opposite, I enjoy them (and, damn, you're good at it O.O)
XD; why should you read the other chaps? you're almost declearing my entire story! (nah not completely true, but with some things (read most things) you were really close not to say right)
I'll try to post chap 5 asap, but I'll go to Germany this weekend, and with school and stuff I am afraid it will take a while T^T m(_ _)m
thanks for the lovely comment ^-^v

[ahega]

aw~ glad to hear that ^______^

haha~ same goes for me. I love reading this stuff (but most people are awfully wrong |3 what's even more entertaining)

Why? xDD Cause I enjoy it! And I think there will be enough surprises or things nobody would think of
(xD~ maybe it's because I like to leave the audience with questionmarks in their eyes, too)

Germany? xDD~ I am currently in Germany. Where are you going to?
Don't mind! I think everyone will understand thiscause most suffer under the same problems, ne xD

*haha* it was a pleasure!

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* well, you really are good at predicting it, though, as I said, some stuff were different, just small things, but in general you were so close and right! o.o ^^ ( you were almost completely right about Saga and Kai, and nobody saw that before, so i'm still impressed >D)
*grin* yeah I like to make the readers wonder what, why and how XD

Oh eh Oberhausen, friends of the family, that's why I still have to go >.> I preferred staying home ^^;;
lol, where are you then, in Germany?

^-^v

[sarcasm_chan]

...this chap wasn't that long, was it? 1 and 3 were DEFINITELY longer...2 probably too XD;;; (that was why this one was finished quite...quick XD; for my habit >.>)

and for the rest of the comment, just one word: Yosh! ^-^v
(and happy you like it, but that is an automatism and does not count as other words XD;) (I am acting weird)
(all these lines do not ount as words either, cause they are weird explanations)