Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-?x?-chap 3/?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ Sorry for taking such a long time, and please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!

!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english is not my mother-tongue..
pairings: ?x

Comments

[silver_tears382]

Whoaaa.....>___< violence..violence..>_< Poor Reita's handsome face's being punched..T_T~

Nice job on this chapter!! XD love it!! eh~ but I don't really get about Aoi..^^; what's his connection between Saga and Shou? and what about Saga and Shou ? >D~ ...

[sarcasm_chan]

m(^_^)m Questions...questions...

YOU"LL SEEEEEE! cause all teh things you've asked will be explained, and abotu Aoi: well eh just Lost someone...and wants to find that person again XD
He just knew Saga and Shou already >D

[silver_tears382]

hehehe~ well...next chapter plzz~~~ XD

and yeeah, I agree with the others...Aoi's sooo sad...poor Aoi..T_T I wish he'd find his happiness again ...;_;

[golden_kimono]

Sure took you long enough. :P Now I want to know what's going to happen next even more. And what's going to happen with Kai and Hiroto? (yeah, my mind immediately jumped to conclusions :P) Ahh, a lot of questions are waiting to be answered.. I liked this chapter. ^^

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* perv! ^^

yeah i took sucha long time...I am sorry, but really had not much time to write m(_ _)m...
I hope it was worth the waiting ^^
*grin* you'll see what will happen ^^ 3 characters left to introduce but in the next chap, i think pairings are already showing up a bit >D

[golden_kimono]

Yeah, I've been reading too much yaoi lately; it's even popping up in my dreams. :P Everything suddenly has a double meaning, it seems.

That's okay, there ARE more important things in the world.
Of course it was! ^^ And Aoi.. You sure like making him feel bad, don't you? :P Poor guy..
...You're going to make pairings no-one expected, aren't you? :P You seem to like toying with people's minds like that. ^^

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* I understand what you mean

lol no really? I thought my fic was teh most important thing in the universe o.o
yeah guess I do like making Aoi the one that feels bad XD; it suits him >D
lol well you are preparing yourself for non-expecting pairings, so the most non-ecpecting thing would be suing expected pairings, but well that si too much reversed psychology for me, I just use pairings that I want, cause i based my story on them >D (one appears at the beginning of chap 3 =D)

[seungjea]

wow!
another chapter after a looooong time~!
i missed this fic!
you've successfully made an evil kai! ^^ not * that * evil, but interestingly evil! ^^ will he gets hiroto? * hopeful eyes * and i'm waiting for him to come out more often!

i love your characters, they're so interesting and full of secrets, please don't make me wait too long to see what's they're hiding!!

“That man is just sad. Every day he is sad.” --> POOR AOI!!! * hugs him and sends him lots of love*

update soon, ok?

[sarcasm_chan]

thank you, yeah sorry for taking such a long time >< I am already starting with four so this won't take so long! =D
*grin* you want more Kai and Hiroto? hmm, and that while there are three characters left to introduce, (that will happen in the next chap) and pairings still have to come >D

I dare to say about the secrets from Kai and Saga: I gave small hint >D but nobody (not that it are much) saw it up till now XD; ;_;
anyway: I'll continue as soon as I can and I am happy you liked it =D

P.S: Aoi is sad ne? ^^

[seungjea]

YES!
aoi is sooo sad!
but he's so mysterious ...
i like ppl who looks mysterious even when they're sad ^^ so ... pls don't bring out the goofy aoi! (i forbid you to see gazette on their backstage dvd!!)

[sarcasm_chan]

love I saw that already for like 300 times XD; and I still made up the sad Aoi, I just wanted something different I guess ^^

[blut_royal]

poor Aoi ;____;
Make him happy again..if you won't...I will...XD

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* and how are you going to make aoi happy in MY fic? >D

[blut_royal]

I#m a pervert little ass, so what do you think? XDDD

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* I more meant: how can YOU make Aoi happy in MY fic? I guess I am the one that has to make him happy...or not >D

[green_wellies]

DRAMA! I love it! So many characters *dizzy* This is so great! I can't wait for your next update!

[sarcasm_chan]

^^ thanks, lol and even more to come o.o;;;
I'll do my best ^^ I am working at 4 it won't take as long as this one took ^_~
happy you liked it...what was so nice about it then? (sorry, I am just wondering ^^) Do you like them in drama? XD; meanie! they'll cry! ^^;;;;; >D

[green_wellies]

I liked the way you introduced the characters into the plot and it left me wanting to know how Saga knew Aoi, Shou, and Nao. I also liked the banter between Hiroto and Kai. I love picturing Kai as a stronger character (not his usual goofy self). hehe. I like drama because it just makes things more interesting! And drama usually ends with happy stuff, so it's worth the crying. ♥

[sarcasm_chan]

thank you ^^ the way Saga met those, will be cleared later ^^
I am happy you like Kai this way, cause I also heard someone saying that she could not picture him like this, I can, that is why i am putting him down like this, after all it is all fictional and apart from the name and the looks, this has nothing to do with the real Kai of course XD;
I see, I have the same thing with drama: and it is also more realistic then just pure happiness and fluff, cause life isn't like that, that is also why I sometimes doubt about making everything okay at the end, not everyone can be happy...^^ but I'll do my best ^^