Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-?x?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is the first chapter of my new fic ^^ (for those who accidentally read the intro, which I deleted later, this one is the intro but then like 7 pages longer ^^;)
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!
!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english

Comments

[yomi_chan]

Indeed a long chapter, but I like to read so it doesn't scare me away ^^
*smile*
It's really interesting and I'm so eager to know, how everything will develop ^----^
*hugs you and gives you a heart shaped cookie*
^^

[sarcasm_chan]

YAY omg, I ams o happy you liked it, I found em a beta-reader so she'll help me, and when she likes it I'll post it on soem comms
But I still think it's quite crappy, >< and I really didn't intend to make ot so long T_T that happened by accident o.o;

[sarcasm_chan]

thanks I guess ^^ I am not sure about it at all, actually i think it's quite...crappy ^^;;
lol I don't mind it to be predictable...
I'm just afraid it si really bad, that's why I did not post it at comms yet ^^;

[sarcasm_chan]

I did post it ^^; and I got a few positive comemnts so yes I am happy =D
I ams till not convinced bgut I will continue and post the other chaps too ^_~

lol, WELL YOU WILL KNOW ^^

[blut_royal]

good ^~^

but not a very used time for a fanfiction. So maybe it takes time to convince some others

[sarcasm_chan]

*smile* I like yto try different things
But it takes time to convince myself ^^;;;
I actually think it's pretty bad, I also did not calculate on you guys reading it already ^^;;

[blut_royal]

Why do you say things like this?
If you would really think it's that bad you haven't uploaded it. So be happy with it!

[sarcasm_chan]

I post stuff, though I think its bad most of the time, I post it, cause I love to see what people think about it...o.o; even critics...
I guess I post it...cause then I can give it better critics myself, and it gives me a reason to write it, cause I love t write, I just don't love what I write ^^
but I do like it when others like it. I just can't really imagine, that's why I always ask why...see? ^^;;;;

[silver_tears382]

Yaaay!! it got longer and more interesting! XD~ Just like I've said, one of my fave setting.....>.< !!next chap plz~ X3 *gives cookies*

[sarcasm_chan]

happy you liked it ^^ X3 cause I still hate it...
^^
....whaah still ahev tos tart with that o.o;
*cookies*
but do you think I've to post it on a comm?

[silver_tears382]

yeap! you have to! XD it's pretty cool..=3

[dunke_engel]

I couldn't help thinking abour takanori nishikawa every time I read Takanori >.<

anyways I liked it ^_^ so don't worry about my mind is a bit sick xD

[sarcasm_chan]

lol thank you ^^ i'll post other chaps as soon as tehy are ready! ^^

*smile* i can understand you ^^;,he'll be called Ruki in most chaps so don't worry ^^;