Comments | saranghaekiss: jagged broken wings

saranghaekiss

jagged broken wings » oneshot.

Jul 16, 2011 01:31

Jagged Broken Wings.
Yunho/Jaejoong
AU, Romance, Small Angst.
wc. 5340.
minor references to self-harm.
Jaejoong doesn't cut the definition of the 'normal child'. Yunho is sure that he wouldn't have him any other way. He's out of his mind and he quotes Oscar Wilde, but he's an angel, fallen, but not broken beyond repair.
( He wanted to tell him he was worth more than sitting himself between the trash and the dirt; that he would give him all the attention in the world if only he would get up and treat himself with self-worth. But he didn't say that. )

pairing / yunho and jaejoong, length / oneshot, genre / romance, genre / angst, genre / au

Comments 29

facetheclouds July 16 2011, 01:08:22 UTC

I really really like it!!! I'm so horrible at writing comments for fic, but I thought it was beautifully written. I loved the characters, I loved the style and the pacing....guh, I love it!!! /fail review

saranghaekiss July 17 2011, 09:14:25 UTC

thank you~!
that's okay, i appreciate your comment! ♥
i'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

love_joongie July 16 2011, 01:55:15 UTC

waaaaah... this made my heart hurt... in a good way.

saranghaekiss July 17 2011, 09:15:52 UTC

kekeke, as long as it's a good way~
thank you for reading and commenting. :)
♥

dilovesyunjae July 16 2011, 02:07:21 UTC

Oh wow. Heartbreakingly beautiful.

saranghaekiss July 17 2011, 09:16:25 UTC

i'm really glad you thought so. ♥
thank you for commenting! ^^

pawshingo July 16 2011, 02:42:31 UTC

This is amazing! I love this, I'm just glad Yunho got to Jae before it was too late. Jae described as an angel was just perfect!

saranghaekiss July 17 2011, 09:17:24 UTC

waah, thank you so much. :D
i'm really glad you liked it. ^^
thank you for a wonderful comment! ♥

toni_luv July 16 2011, 03:42:00 UTC

this story is so cute

saranghaekiss July 17 2011, 09:17:54 UTC

thank you very much. :3
and thank you for commenting~ ♥