Comments | saranghaekiss: maybe god can forgive this one

saranghaekiss

maybe god can forgive this one » oneshot

Sep 02, 2010 19:32

Maybe God Can Forgive This One.
Yunho/Jaejoong.
Romance, Fluff, shortlived Angst.
It's always felt like the right kind of wrong, and you try, you try so hard to seperate from him. But he always pulls you back in - just like a force field.
( It takes another 22 hours and seven minutes until you’re face to face with the man you never thought you’d touch again, when he bumps into you whilst reading a book entitled, ‘10 Ways to Cure a Broken Heart’. )

pairing / yunho and jaejoong, length / oneshot, genre / romance, genre / fluff

Comments 33

museelo September 2 2010, 19:21:41 UTC

SPOT

museelo September 2 2010, 19:57:05 UTC

Wow I really liked the way you wrote that :)
All the thoughts and all... It was short -somehow- but it was really good ^^

Thanks for this ^^

saranghaekiss September 3 2010, 11:02:52 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you liked it! :D

Thanks for reading & commenting! ♥

haru_ran September 2 2010, 19:33:10 UTC

That's just ... lovely. Heartwrenching; but so damn beautiful. ;~; &hearts

saranghaekiss September 3 2010, 11:04:11 UTC

Thanks, bb! So glad you enjoyed it! :3

Thanks for reading & commenting! ♥

haru_ran September 3 2010, 15:49:07 UTC

Thanks for writing this, too. &hearts
:3

yunjaefor September 2 2010, 19:44:26 UTC

This is beautiful! And YunHo's character here is so sweet, with that book-) Love it~

saranghaekiss September 3 2010, 11:05:31 UTC

I like Yunho here! I want one, too. Kekeke. XD
Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

satoshiice September 2 2010, 20:05:49 UTC

this was...guh...so good...I really liked yunho's character in this...he is just so sweet, I wanna cuddle him!! aww...poor jae, i think perhaps he was over thinking too much but in a sense it is reality, and I'm glad you showed that in your fic...I'm really happy that they got back together in the end XD

saranghaekiss September 3 2010, 11:07:40 UTC

I wanna cuddle him too but I fear Jae's bitchslaps... :P XD
I'm a sucker for happy endings! :3

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

ingenu3 September 2 2010, 22:42:56 UTC

This is most wonderful.

:))

I love it ~

saranghaekiss September 3 2010, 11:08:18 UTC

Glad you liked it, bb!

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥