Comments | sarangauljima: the atmosphere is dense

pabogateunfish in sarangauljima

the atmosphere is dense

Jan 30, 2010 03:38

the atmosphere is dense
yoochun ♥ junsu | yoochun ♥ fc
angst | ~1,000 words

a/n: a mindless yoosu-angst piece i wrote in a daze. thought i'd share it with you guys. wanna know how mindless this is? well, i couldn't even make up a title for it. :x

( There is a pale mark where a ring used to be on one of Yoochun’s fingers and it itches. Junsu reaches out and holds the hand where the finger is. There is coldness seeping from Junsu’s palm where his hand is warm. Yoochun’s eyes mist. )

pairing: yoochun | fc, pairing: yoochun | junsu, genre: angst, oneshot, os: the atmosphere is dense

Comments 37

:) aleemin January 29 2010, 20:18:49 UTC

this is sad. TT-TT

But i still love you,BB!
:)

Re: :) pabogateunfish January 29 2010, 20:44:03 UTC

idk what i'm thinking obviously. *n*

awwwww thank you, sweet! ♥

missyoosu January 29 2010, 20:19:20 UTC

WOW! I'm very impressed with this kind writing. Such a sad story too. Poor Yoochun. He doesn't have Junsu there to comfort and love him.

pabogateunfish January 29 2010, 20:45:38 UTC

i'm sorry? /pats chun. err.

thank you! /blushes ^^;

lammyellaxxx January 29 2010, 20:22:10 UTC

Awww... So sad :(
is it wrong for me to be glad that Chun can't let Su go (yoosu love forever!!!)which causes his marriage to fall apart even though Su's dead?
Su is dead right? Or is Yoosu simply broken?
Great read. I <3 your writing!
&hearts

pabogateunfish January 29 2010, 20:47:27 UTC

no, it's totally alright. i guess i was aiming for that too, to be honest. a love that's once gone, can never be replaced by anyone.

edit: and oh, yeah, su's dead. :x

awww you're so sweet. thank you so much! ♥ :,)

jazzieshoes January 29 2010, 22:05:15 UTC

So sad; but I was in the mood for angst so it's all good.
And for some reason I liked this line, “I’m here for you, but you can’t ask for more than that Chun. You know that. It isn’t right for you to ask for more.”
Anyways, really liked it! ^^

pabogateunfish January 30 2010, 14:57:37 UTC

awwwww thank you! i hope this feeds some of your appetite for angst. heh. :D;;

♥!

ting5 January 29 2010, 23:32:31 UTC

sad..this is sad *sigh*

pabogateunfish January 30 2010, 14:58:21 UTC

come here, love. /hugs

♥

ting5 February 1 2010, 00:21:55 UTC

*huggles back*