stained glass: chapter 2

Oct 26, 2009 14:26

stained glass: chapter 2
yunho ♥ jaejoong | yoochun ♥ fc | jaejoong ♥ bi/jihoon
romance | drama | angst | AU | R
+3,370 words
beta-ed by: yaoi_hoshi. ♥ :D
summary: of drag queens and crime; lust denied and fulfilled.

warning: contains drag-queens!jaechun, mafia!homin and violence - AND IN THIS CHAPTER ROUGH SMEX D8. don't say i didn't warn you.

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pairing: yoochun | fc, pairing: jaejoong | rain, stained glass: chapter 2, pairing: yunho | jaejoong, chaptered

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audjae October 26 2009, 05:26:32 UTC
omo..chunnie..T___T i feel sorry for him...he only wanted to be loved by someone..but chunnie dear, the way you are thinking now is wrong!! aigoo..i hope things get better in the future for chunnie! got yoosu ma? XD
and yunjae know each other in here?? waaaa, i cant wait to know what will happen next hehehehe
update soon unnie! thanks for the wonderful chappie!

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pabogateunfish October 26 2009, 08:41:34 UTC
chunnie is a tortured soul in this story. someone battered by his past and having no inspiration for the future, only hoping that someone will hold him because he's desperate for affection. writing his character is the hardest, to be honest. ;_;

yoosu? heh. mayyyyyyyyyybe. i can't say. >:p

i'll try to update soon! aja aja! ^^99

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chloe1910 October 26 2009, 07:02:29 UTC
oh imie ah, how i wish i could send some flying durians to you right now, and no, it's not for you to eat ( ... )

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pabogateunfish October 26 2009, 08:50:13 UTC
it's okay, i don't eat durians anyway. haha. /runs from you xDD ( ... )

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celinewalksin10 October 26 2009, 08:42:50 UTC
oh my no. jaejoong ends up <3ing rain. roar.
i love how yunho was struck by jae's insane beauty. ;)

somebody help yoochun! :(

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pabogateunfish October 26 2009, 08:59:28 UTC
rain is charming, and it's easy for jae to get flustered by someone so charming. but falling in love, ah no. not yet at least. /winks

jae's beauty is unmistakable. heh. and chun is...he will find someone.

thank you for reading, bb. ♥

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debbris October 26 2009, 08:43:44 UTC
Somehow, a broken character like Yoona made my heart ache. Poor thing. It's just like any one of us, real person. The steorotype of wanting to be loved and how wrong is that?. Idk how you'll end the DonghoonxYoochun relationship hun but srsly, I can't say I'm not enjoying the whole tension in this chap. Intense yet addictive.

This is so worth waiting for , girl.
Gambate for the 3rd chap oki?

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pabogateunfish October 26 2009, 09:02:01 UTC
It's just like any one of us, real person. The stereotype of wanting to be loved and how wrong is that? - U GOT IT, DEAR. 8] chunnie is hard to write because he's so...human. so flawed and broken, and for someone like that you can't just say 'hey u shouldn't do that' and expect him to follow it. ;_;

your comment made me so happy~ thank you so much! and yes, aja aja hwaiting!! ^^99

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chunfacebiased October 26 2009, 08:50:47 UTC
holy shit o:
srsly i was anticipating yunho's entrance to this story sfm & goddamn i got a very suspenseful one ♥ oh my i can't wait to see what's going to happen next! obviously that means that yunho & jaejoong met before then , right? wow , i wonder how jaejoong was before he became a drag queen! and....i really don't know what to say about my chunface :'( it makes me so sad to read him getting abused like that just to feel loved. doesn't he know that jaejoong already loves him sfm? and why does yoochun's family hate him so much? 0: idk did you explain it yet because i guess i forgot. oh my this is like the only story i come to detox for even when i'm so busy :') thank you so much bb! ♥

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pabogateunfish October 26 2009, 09:14:44 UTC
heh. a lot will be explained in the next few chapters. i need to introduce the characters and set up the atmosphere before i move to laying out the relationships and their dynamics. *u*

chunnie's character is...very hard to write on. his family shunned him away because he loves differently, and they can't accept that. and because of their hatred, chun lost his self-worth. but he will have salvation...i promise you.

awww thank you so much, my dear. i'll try to update as soon as i can! aja aja! ^^9

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