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More please. sljones1951 July 23 2009, 00:07:09 UTC
This is terrific. You are managing to keep the threads of several TV shows from getting too tangled up and yet still keep the story moving. Great work.

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Re: More please. sarah_jones July 23 2009, 00:16:08 UTC
Thanks so much! *blushes*

I hope I can continue to do exaclty that.

Now I'm motivated to write more right now. :-))

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aliens anonymous July 23 2009, 08:45:19 UTC
So the aliens from "The Daedalus Variations" episode are the new enemy. I guess it was only a matter of time before they showed up. This is a great story. I can't wait for more. Please update very soon.

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Re: aliens sarah_jones July 27 2009, 01:35:49 UTC
Yes, that's what I thought. They were interesting enough and I was curious about them. So I just had to write them into this story.

I'm working on the next chapter and will hopefully have it up soon.

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parts 1-13 4thdixiechick July 25 2009, 15:26:22 UTC
here via a rec, and all I can say is Wow!
Not only is there a story, you've given us photos and videos as well - you a truly very creative!
Very interesting crossovers, and I can't wait to see more of the bad guys!

thanks for writing (and vidding) this and sharing it with us!

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Re: parts 1-13 sarah_jones July 27 2009, 01:33:52 UTC
Thanks for your nice comment! I'm glad you like the story. :-)

Hearing that you like what I write makes me want to write more. I'll definitely try to have the next chapter up soon.

You're very welcome! I just got that idea in my head one day and had to write it down.

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story anonymous October 13 2009, 03:12:40 UTC
Please update this awesome story VERY soon.

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Re: story sarah_jones October 13 2009, 03:42:13 UTC
I will. I'm already writing the next chapter. I was busy with exams lately and then got sick. But now I finally have time again and so many new ideas as well. :-)) The next chapter should be up this week. ;-)

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nemogbr October 19 2009, 08:45:15 UTC
Looking forward to finding out the name of this new enemy. Probably became cyborgs to defend against the Wraith.

Preferred the way Atlantis defeated the Wraith in comparison to the whole deus ex machina, as the Ancient devices represented, during the last season of Stargate SG1.

I hated the restrictions over the ZPM. They only managed to procure a whole set in the last episode??

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sarah_jones October 20 2009, 02:21:06 UTC
Thanks for you comments. I'm glad you like my story and that you even added me for updates. :-)

You mean you hate that I wrote that they need new ZPM's? Well, I thought their ZPMs had to be pretty much depleted after they used that wormhole drive.
Carson said something about not being able to move Atlantis and shoot at the same time because there wasn't enough power. And then they kind of fell down to earth. I guess if they had another ZPM lying around they would have used it. That's my point of view anyway. In my story they have one ZPM with some power left. As the city isn't flying anymore the ZPM is ok for a while. But they do need more.

I always wanted Sally Sparrow to be the doctor's companion, too. I was really hoping she'd join 11. But I guess we're out of luck. :-(

I hope the new doctor won't ruin everything, too. But so far I loved all characters and actors, so I'm hoping that will continue.

Yes, SG-3 are in a "bit" of trouble. *g* I'm writing the next chapter and hopefully will be done soon. ;-)

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nemogbr October 20 2009, 06:15:56 UTC
If the Doctor shows up, I'm sure he can assist in providing power back to the ZPMs.

I always thought that the TARDIS would be run along the same lines. Perhaps the Gallifreyans are an offshoot of the Ancients who preferred a different path and did not desire Ascension?

I did wonder about the sigil on the cyborg ship. Reminded me of a stylised basic human. Arms, legs and head. I haven't read of anything from the Stargate creators. Would have been nice to get more data for the fans.

We can then take over afterwards...lol

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