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sarah_jones

It's only just beginning: chapter 8

Jul 05, 2009 04:30

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John anonymous July 8 2009, 08:23:28 UTC

Oh man I hope John will be okay. This story is great. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Still enjoying this sljones1951 July 22 2009, 23:31:15 UTC

I am really enjoying this. Another small criticism, you wrote,"at least half of his live." It should be, "at least half of his life." I hope you don't mind.

sarah_jones July 23 2009, 00:02:40 UTC

I definitely don't mind. Any mistake that I can correct makes the story better. But unfortunately I can't seem to find that pat in this chapter. I guess I'm blind. :-( Could you help me find it and tell me which part it is in?
Thanks a lot for your help!