The Drawbacks of Breathing

[saracupcaked]

Part A of The Drawbacks of Breathing can be found here at Geekfiction.

The Drawbacks of Breathing, Part B

Comments

Merci !!

[flo1804]

I'm Glad you're back.
This is an amazing piece of writing : the layout, your prose.
Wow, Wonderful.
I'm looking forward an update.
Thanks for sharing this with us.

Re: Merci !!

[saracupcaked]

I have quite a bit going on now, but yes, it's nice to be back :) Thanks for the wonderful words! ♥

[til]

CSI Sidle returns,
professional, fatigued and
muddy, trying to hide
scared little Sara. Thia line totally choked me up. Wow, just wow, really great work wven without the layout, but the layout just made it into the masterpiece it is. Exceptional.

[saracupcaked]

That last bit was probably the most fun to write, and I'm glad I was able to connect emotionally with you on this piece :) I was hesitant at first with the layout, but I'm glad everyone seems to love it. It was a calculated risk that paid off.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[thequeenofsin]

damn girl... damn...

omg...

wow.. can't wait for more...

[saracupcaked]

Haha, I'm working on it :D Thanks!

[smacky30]

This was amazing. What a way to strip everything down to the bare bones. Just beautiful.

[saracupcaked]

Thank you ♥

I wanted to change the way I write Grissom and Sara for once, and this has been a wonderful challenge.

[moochiecat2009]

I'm in awe! This is truly amazing, almost spiritual in its intensity. I haven't read any prose in this style, so this is a new experience for me, and I truly look forward to its continuation. (For some reason, LJ isn't showing an capitals, so I hope this looks all right).

[saracupcaked]

I wanted to challenge myself in the way I write Grissom and Sara, so this, as a learning experience, was perfect. Thanks! :)

btw, it's my layout. As long as you capitalize a letter, it shows up as capitalized on the comment itself.