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saraah

All That Glitters Is Not Gold

Oct 11, 2007 19:13

Title: All That Glitters Is Not Gold
Author: whatxsarahxsaid
Pairing(s): Bill/Gustav, one-sided Bill/Tom
Rating: Uh…PG-13 for slight alcohol?
Disclaimer: Sooo not mine.
Warnings: Erm. Angst, I guess. I suck at this.
Summary: He watches Bill in the corner as he watches Tom and wishes it were him Bill obsessively watches.
Author's notes: This is what happens ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fandom, tokio hotel, public

Comments 14

casey711 October 11 2007, 23:28:48 UTC

That's so good, Srah! You're really good at writing =D *tacklehug*

saraah October 13 2007, 20:47:25 UTC

Haha, don't lie, it stunts your life span =P Thank you so much for reading this, Casey. It means a lot that you actually wanted to read it, even though you don't know the fandom, haha.

lirren October 11 2007, 23:50:55 UTC

Oh, Sarah, that was lovely! You did an excellent job with both Gustav and Bill. I could really feel Bill's pain. And I could tell how badly Gustav wanted just a little bit more than he can ever have. It really breaks my heart for both of them. Well done!

saraah October 13 2007, 20:49:54 UTC

Ohmygosh, thank you. I can't tell you how paranoid I was that both of their emotions weren't going to show. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ^__^ I really appreciate it =)

gajastar October 12 2007, 02:32:44 UTC

Poor sad Gustav! This was sweet and heartbreaking. <3

saraah October 13 2007, 20:50:59 UTC

Aw, thank you for reading and commenting. I was going to make it a touch sadder, but decided against it. Good thing I didn't =P

letitbegin October 12 2007, 16:40:04 UTC

This was really good! I don't know why I always expect your writing to be plain, probably because you say you can't write, but it was really impressive. You used lots of detail and I liked the imagery and distance a lot. Great job!

saraah October 13 2007, 20:53:22 UTC

Haha, well, thank you. I'm glad it wasn't plain. I really appreciate your comments and input. When I posted it, I was a little concerned because you hadn't read over it and told me what you thought. I told Shana you're like my security blanket. Haha.

Look, it's your icon! haha. <3 It's lovely. Really one of my favorites.

alwaysmatt October 14 2007, 21:51:40 UTC

I loved it! I really liked all of the imagery. You have such a way with words that make everything seem to flow so nicely together. It was really sad, too! Have you ever written something that wasn't? Hehe :P

saraah October 22 2007, 18:27:12 UTC

Aw, thank you. That means a lot that you read it. LOL And I have written one piece that was funny.