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shayna_maidel September 29 2009, 11:15:30 UTC
Wow, this is gorgeous. It reads almost like The Stone Rose, but probably better (that book was a bit weird ^_-). I loved how you put a bit of the explanation at the beginning, and how it comes together.

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sapphire_child September 30 2009, 07:52:05 UTC
The Stone Rose is infinitely better when you listen to it being read by David Tennant - give that audio book a try ;)

I'm glad the format worked for you - I was a bit worried about it being confusing! Cheers :)

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erikau September 29 2009, 12:33:31 UTC
This is a beautifully written story, and I think you've captured both characters--but especially the Doctor--very well. Thank you!

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sapphire_child September 30 2009, 07:53:02 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it and thank you for the feedback on my characterisation :)

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teruel_a_witch September 29 2009, 14:23:56 UTC
*GULP* *iz staring at the graphics for a while*
Why hasn't anyone made something like this before? *wants*

Oh, and what a brilliant fic, it's so beautifully written and thoughtful and just spot-on, I LOVE all timey-wimey-ness and Ten's babbling explanations, but especially KISSING and CUTENESS <3333 hee, and Rose making his hair, that would certainly explain why he had never styled it before or after))

This body likes being touched.”
Guh.
Rose held her arms out to him as they met but as the Doctor took her into his arms and spun her around it took him a good few seconds before he realised that he was actually kissing her and not just hugging her as he had initially intended.
Oh, why,why BBC hasn't chosen THIS timeline, that would be SO right *sighs dreamily*

“What’s got into you?” she wanted to know but when he put his hand on her cheek, her face softened from confusion into flickering uncertainty. “Doctor?”

“Rose Tyler.” he murmured.
Awww, I love that it's really the only explanation needed, he just said her name and so much ( ... )

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sapphire_child September 30 2009, 07:54:45 UTC
Oh well then, I suppose I'd better upload the original manip for you then! :D


... )

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teruel_a_witch September 30 2009, 15:30:32 UTC
Woo, thank you-thank you-thank you <333 Gorgeously done)))

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sapphire_child October 1 2009, 04:09:22 UTC
No worries - enjoy!

Also, thank you for inadvertantly leading me to seduffs livejournal - I've adored her vids for AGES but had no idea she did graphics until I saw the icons you have by her! xoxo

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spiritofeowyn September 29 2009, 18:10:50 UTC
Great job! Lovely description of how the doctor seems time. I feel like I learned something. :D

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sapphire_child September 30 2009, 07:56:09 UTC
I feel like I learned something. - Haha, I'm glad! He does have a way with words doesn't he?

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erateini September 29 2009, 18:26:16 UTC
You made the episode beautiful!

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sapphire_child September 30 2009, 07:56:36 UTC
Aw, but it was already beautiful! I just made it shippier ^_^

Thank you!

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