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sapphire_child

New Lost Fanfiction; Better Days

Dec 03, 2007 15:28

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jemmalynette December 3 2007, 19:42:26 UTC

This was so lovely! I adore the Kate/Charlie friendship. So sweet! I love this idea. Charlie's so adorable, aww. =]

sapphire_child December 4 2007, 03:37:52 UTC

Funnily enough, I used to ship Kate/Charlie - wayyyy back in the days before Tabula Rasa aired. Funny eh? And I still love writing them as friends, they've got such a peaceful feeling between them *contented sigh*

Thanks Jemm!

elliotsmelliot December 3 2007, 21:21:55 UTC

I was in the mood for something sweet and hopeful and this fit perfectly. I also have a soft spot for whispered conversations in the night. The chat with Kate was great, as was the final imagery of Charlie reaching to touch Aaron's face. Thanks for sharing.

sapphire_child December 4 2007, 03:40:41 UTC

You are most welcome! I'm so pleased that this tickled your fancy ^_^

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sapphire_child December 4 2007, 03:45:44 UTC

And if I had a fireplace I might do just that ^_^ what a lovely image you've concocted for me there!

Thank you as always for your kind words, it's lovely to be back again ^_^

meagan4dominic December 4 2007, 06:43:58 UTC

I think that this was a very different place to take the challenge & I really liked it, I thought it was sweet & you wrote Kate well, she actually didn't bug me. I hope that you write more soon!

sapphire_child December 5 2007, 04:37:16 UTC

Oh don't worry, I've got a lot more to post! I just finished two more fics last night! ^_^

meagan4dominic December 5 2007, 04:58:42 UTC

Ooo YAY! Can't wait to see what you've come up with now

musicalrose January 4 2008, 03:55:00 UTC

Goodness gracious!! Your stories are always so good, & this 1's no exception! Oh where to start!? Hurley as jolly ol' St. Nick? *tears of laughter* All that stuff about better days? * sentimental tears...@ 1 point tears of laughter when Charlie mentioned his guitar as an afterthought* Interestingly enough, what I liked best was the simple pleasure of some1 referring to Charlie as Aaron's "dad". Although he pretty much is, in every sense of the word, I don't see many people referring to him as such in fan fics...& certainly not on the show! It was nice to see :) & the way you wrote the whole segment of Charlie crawling into bed w/ Claire to the very last line was simply beautiful! <3 Simply amazing job!! *clap-clap-clap-clap!* (p.s.~ Sorry this review's so late!)

sapphire_child January 10 2008, 03:48:26 UTC

That's okay! Better late than never eh? Cheers for the review m'dear - I'm glad you enjoyed it =)