Songfic: The sound of missing you (1/1)

Mar 13, 2010 20:26

TITLE: Songfic: The sound of missing you (1/1)

AUTHOR: sapphicwarrior

PAIRING: Callie/Arizona

RATING: I have no idea really, PG-13 I think. There’s nothing graphic in it.

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fanfiction, callie/arizona

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brittlovesher March 13 2010, 20:19:37 UTC
You...I...this...Callie...Arizona...and...I can't even form words right now. Give me a moment.

*goes in the corner and pulls herself together*

Okay, I'm back now. Sorry. God, this is amazing. The depths of the emotion that Callie is experiencing but not only her, Arizona as well, even though it isn't written from her prospective.

“Will you be my mummy?”. I look at Arizona. What is her point in this? She must see the confusion in my eyes because she quickly starts speaking.

“I love you, Calliope. I can’t live without you. And maybe… maybe having kids isn’t so bad. Maybe I’ll be strong enough to be a mom when I have you to chase away the tiny coffins I see…”

I interrupt her. “I love you too, Arizona and I can’t live without you either. I’ll continue to love you even if we don’t have any kids.” This? This made the fic an epic win in my opinion.

Amazing job and I didn't cry...badly. lol. :)

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sapphicwarrior March 13 2010, 20:27:25 UTC
thank you so much for that nice comment :). I haven't written many Callie/Arizona fics yet so I was a bit nervous about this one, also because it's a sad fic. But I'm glad you liked it :D.

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ifabi March 13 2010, 20:55:49 UTC
So you thought ,that making Az go back to Callie with a baby shirt that said "Will you be my mommy?" wouldn't make us cry TOO MUCH? Dude ,I was already in tears winces the very first line! (it was a very powerful one). This was amazing ,hearbreaking ,sad and happy ,all at the same time. But loved it from the beginning to the end.

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sapphicwarrior March 13 2010, 21:23:14 UTC
glad you liked it, even if it made you a bit sad.

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djrach March 14 2010, 01:29:50 UTC
Ok I've got to admit I read the end before I went back and read the rest. Glad it had a happy ending because I can't promise I would have gone back and read it. I've just read so many sad fics lately and it's the weekend and I don't want to be sad anymore dammit.

Anyway my point is this was amazingly awesome, and I'm glad I went back and read it cos if I didn't I would have missed out! :)

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sapphicwarrior March 16 2010, 18:23:22 UTC
I probably would have done the same, reading the end first. I can't write stories without a happy ending, I tried once and it didn't work out.
I'm glad you read it anyway, despite it being sad. Thanks also for commenting :D!

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missn_hahn March 14 2010, 03:47:47 UTC
That was great, as always -- don't expect any different! Glad you're writing again!

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sapphicwarrior March 16 2010, 18:22:03 UTC
I'm also glad to be writing again :). Thanks for reading and commenting :D!

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arizonafan March 14 2010, 04:16:28 UTC
i lovee thi song
great

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sapphicwarrior March 16 2010, 18:23:54 UTC
I love the song too :), thanks for reading and commenting :D

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