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sapphicwarrior

AU fic: Without you (12/?)

Nov 17, 2009 15:43

TITLE: Without you…

AUTHOR: sapphicwarrior

PAIRING: Callie/Erica

RATING: NC-1. warning: there is domestic abuse in this story!

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fanfiction, au, without you, callie/erica

Comments 7

punky_96 November 18 2009, 02:33:24 UTC

Wow. What a rollercoaster ride. Well done even if it was dark and twisty for Callie. I can't wait to see where your inspiration has sparked off to.

What a pull on the heart strings for Erica and what a set of crazy bad for Callie. The mother... Ooooh. This is going to be some ride. :)

sapphicwarrior November 22 2009, 19:57:33 UTC

some ride indeed, a real roller coaster ride like you said and the ride isn't over yet.
But the dark and twisty for Callie is almost over.
thanks for reading and commenting :D

avenavs November 18 2009, 15:40:04 UTC

i love Erica's McBadAss persona making an appearance here. but poor Callie...:( protective Hahn is Hot Hahn! great update!

this is going to be very interesting now that momma torres is in town.

sapphicwarrior November 22 2009, 19:53:35 UTC

I like protective Erica too and you are right, Erica is hot when being protective of Callie.
Momma Torres in town will be interesting indeed... :)
Thanks for reading and commenting

melificent811 November 23 2009, 00:22:50 UTC

I love how Erica got all cage-fighter on the boyfriend. AWESOME! I'm so glad that she stepped in forced him out of Callie's home.

Wonderful continuation of the journey. I'm enjoying watching how that pair can't seem to get away from each other as much as they want (and basically need) to be friends at the moment.

Can't wait to see what happens next. BRAVO!!!!!

sapphicwarrior November 23 2009, 18:33:04 UTC

thanks so much for the nice comment :D, it makes my muse very happy :)

mickaela82 December 30 2009, 06:58:07 UTC

Here I am again, part 2:

Actually, Jason, there are no more drugs in that house for you to steal :) So just take your drug craving ass out of there. Get lost and find another idiot.

And Callie's STILL contemplating what to do? How big an idiot can she be? WHAT last chance, when not only he's abusing her (as if that weren't too much by itself), but she's also in love with someone else. Gah! Sending her to the White Room now!