Some portions of this fic I felt like should be part of a song it was so lyrical. *__* Overall, the feeling I take away from this fic is that it was extremely raw, but in a good, fresh way.
Also, I loved the way you transitioned from time period to time period. I thought it was very clever and original, etc etc.
And I would try to quote some lines at you, but I would need 102981928 comment boxes for that. So. JUST KNOW THAT I REALLY ENJOYED THIS, OK. :D
I absolutely loved the transitions in this fic, and seriously, as a violinist, the way you portrayed music felt so wonderful and passionate. In a sense of, wholly raw and there, uncut but in the most amazing way. It was perfectly bittersweet and everything just, fit. MEH.
Your fic just totally fflkjfss blew me away and I would write a more in depth comment but It's like 4 minutes past one and you've just mushed my brain further than it should have originally been mushed. But still I enjoyed it SO MUCH and it was so awesome and I'll stop babbling now.
VERY LATE REPLY BUT...theprerogativeJanuary 15 2009, 14:08:08 UTC
Thank you for giving this a chance (: Hearing that a violinist liked it totally made my day! It's actually a continuation of a fic I wrote previously (:
I love everything about it! The emotive language, the pervading hurt and cynicism and the very thin, undying thread of hope that underlies the hopelessness of the entire situation that Atobe and Oshitari found themselves in. It's very wonderfully written and I really loved this piece.
Thank you for sharing! You're a wonderful writer, anon-san!
VERY LATE REPLY BUT...theprerogativeJanuary 15 2009, 14:08:57 UTC
I'm sorry that it broke your heart and I thank you for giving this a chance. It's actually a continuation of a fic I wrote previously for another exchange.
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Some portions of this fic I felt like should be part of a song it was so lyrical. *__* Overall, the feeling I take away from this fic is that it was extremely raw, but in a good, fresh way.
Also, I loved the way you transitioned from time period to time period. I thought it was very clever and original, etc etc.
And I would try to quote some lines at you, but I would need 102981928 comment boxes for that. So. JUST KNOW THAT I REALLY ENJOYED THIS, OK. :D
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Your fic just totally fflkjfss blew me away and I would write a more in depth comment but It's like 4 minutes past one and you've just mushed my brain further than it should have originally been mushed. But still I enjoyed it SO MUCH and it was so awesome and I'll stop babbling now.
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I love everything about it! The emotive language, the pervading hurt and cynicism and the very thin, undying thread of hope that underlies the hopelessness of the entire situation that Atobe and Oshitari found themselves in. It's very wonderfully written and I really loved this piece.
Thank you for sharing! You're a wonderful writer, anon-san!
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