Tucked away inside your sleeves -- 1.3

[sansunparapluie]

Sixty-two miles; Jinki/Taemin; PG-13
note: Okay, finally found a title to replace the working title. Half of me wants to reorganize/edit this into a proper three-shot one of these days but I don't love it enough (yet) to put in the effort.

part 1.1 | part 1.2 | part 1.3

Comments

[effi_g]

So I read straight through from 0.3 to 1.3. Couldn't bring myself to stop reading long enough to comment on all parts ^^
Your writing is beautiful, the power of the emotions is amazing. I just wish I knew why jinki was crying, and why taemin is so concerned. looking forward to more.

Thank you for sharing. Do you mind if I add/watch you so that I don't miss the updates?

[sansunparapluie]

Haha it's okay. I'm just glad you've taken the time to read and comment. :9 Curious, who's your OTP? Ontae?

The timeline skips around a little bit (wanted to make it skip around a lot more, but alas, not skilled enough to shuffle the events without killing the flow :x) so I hope the order of events is still kinda clear...? Anyway, "The Incident" (xD;) will be revealed soon.

And sure, add/watch away~ ^^

[effi_g]

yep yep Ontae it is ^^ well at the moment anyway... I don't mind mixing those two (seperately and together tehe) with minho from time to time XD

I did notice that it was skipping a bit, It's easy enough to follow once you figure out if it's before or after the last bit you read about. I kind of like writing like that though, cause it takes more skill then just writing a series of event in a straight line. And it also makes it more fun to read cause you actually have to think and process what is going on.

adding now ^^

[sansunparapluie]

Haha you have switched OTPs a few times then? And I do love my Onho. I haven't written much yet, just a few stories, but what can I say...when I come up with ideas, Onho tend to be the default characters I turn to. xD;

Speaking of shuffling events, you know what I think is cool? Those stories that happen in reverse chronological order and still make sense. And you don't feel like knowing the plot backwards spoils any of the surprises. It's a whole 'nother level of awesomeness that I don't dare to attempt yet.