(If it can't be my design) Tell me where do we draw the line

Feb 04, 2010 21:36

Title: (If it can't be my design) Tell me where do we draw the line
Song: Poets of the Fall - Where do we draw the line
Author: sanshinyia
Pairing: ShoxJun
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Angst
Disclaimer: I'm just playing a god, making people do things they probably never have done and never would do.
Summary: Time after time it's the same smell and taste of someone ( Read more... )

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norbbiz February 4 2010, 20:00:01 UTC
;___; so sad! full of pain and suffering love nino as sho's angel
you do know i don't really read this pairing right?!! well anyways i loved it ;__;
(i normally am not fan of sad stories but somehow this touched my heart.)
i feel like crying ^^; but shortly i love it and i think you have done very good job!!:3
so... when can i read more your ficss XDD

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sanshinyia February 4 2010, 20:08:57 UTC
Blame the damn song, it's so pretty and sad and I love it~ T_T I thought he'd be the most suitable to the role~ &hearts
I know you don't, but you should xD
ASDFJKL; I'm so relieved you like it! :D
um... That depends on when I'll be able to finish them XD I have like 1000000 things unfinished just lying around and taking space. There's nothing wrong with my imagination, I just can't write! XD

WE HAVE MATCHING SHO-ICONS! &hearts

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norbbiz February 4 2010, 20:16:42 UTC
haaai~ i blame the song. even thought i have no idea what this song is but lyrics
are pretty and sad ;__; he definitely is!!&hearts
i know you think i should XD
haha well you honestly have writed a fic that got into my heart.
which actually makes some problems for me 'cause i might want to read more fics bout them >.<
OMG! YOU HAVE TO FINISH THEM!!!!! -3- besides you can write!! :3

OMG, SHO-LOV &hearts!

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sanshinyia February 4 2010, 21:06:18 UTC
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bj2p_v_FfJ8 <-- that's the song :3 One of the reasons why I like Poets of the Fall so much is that their lyrics are so beautiful and full of meaning.
Well they're amazing together and who wouldn't love them!? XD
It really means a lot to me that you can say something like that! Maybe now I'll have enough courage to share it with other people too~ x_x
I seriously recommend reading more about them, if only because this fandom has many amazing writers!
I'M TRYING~~~ X_______X but I'm too caught up in thinking I can'twrite that I don't have the inspiration to finish them.XD

SHO'S SO LOVEABLE &hearts !

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iupdarlin February 4 2010, 22:08:07 UTC
Wow, this was sooooo sad ;_; I'll admit that at first I was confused because I thought Jun was the main character XD Stupid me. But sad or not, I really liked it DoS. It was really well written.

Oh, I read your other ending, and I loved it! I can see why you'd be dissatisfied with it though, because it kind of didn't fit, even though I love happy endings :/

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sanshinyia February 4 2010, 22:17:12 UTC
Sad fics seem to be the only ones I can actually finish :D Thank you for pointing that out, really! x_X I hate it when writers don't mention whose point of view is used and now I did the same mistake myself...XD Stupid me for forgetting to mention it's in Sho's POV :3 Thank you for your compliment!

Yeah, it was too naive.-.- But I'm happy you liked it nevertheless!

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hiro_chan February 5 2010, 12:57:20 UTC
oooohhh aaaangst <3333. *devours*

what i love about sakumoto is that they can do angst well . and this is nicely done. I like this ending better than the original one because it's more realistic. i think nino would prolly won't leave him alone if he gave jun a second chance after all that.

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sanshinyia February 5 2010, 13:19:08 UTC
Good that there are people who like angst too~ :DD

They're rather easy to write about because you can write anything about them, be it angst, crack, au, romance... You name it. Exactly my thoughts! It would be too naive for Sho to give Jun yet another chance and like you said Nino would definitely have something to say about that decision :D

Thank you for reading and dropping me a comment!

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msmuse March 28 2010, 20:12:02 UTC
This story moved me very much. Thank you for sharing it. I actually liked this version better. It fits. There are some things that can't be easily put back together. It takes time to heal, whether getting back or moving on. I would have loved to have seen this story continue. It sounds like such a wonderful precursor to an awesome story. But thanks again. :)

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sanshinyia March 28 2010, 20:34:52 UTC
Thank you for reading and taking the time to drop a comment! I agree with you completely, sometimes happy endings just aren't possible and this was one of those times. That's why I rewrote it in the first place. I'm afraid this is the limit for my writing skills (And imagination? Maybe not.) but if I ever feel like continuing this I shall do so :D It was my pleasure :)

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