Alpha-mates Chapter-13/ ?

Mar 20, 2013 10:42

Chapter-13
Summery- What happens when two rivals are compelled into a mating-bond ???
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forced mating, alpha!jared, a/b/o, humiliation!, fiction, alpha! jensen

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babyreaper March 21 2013, 01:39:30 UTC
Fantastic update, the two of them seem to be getting on better, Jensen is very understanding of Jared's position. And it was good to see jared not act like a bull in a china shop, raging at everything Jensen said or did. Is Jared's dad, Gerald, going to make waves?? What's going to happen next? More soon. Thanks.

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sanshal March 23 2013, 19:22:04 UTC
Thank you!

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samjsjlove March 21 2013, 02:18:22 UTC
I'm so glad Jensen didn't take Jared up on his offer - I think it's important that they both really want it before doing it.

I'm curious to see how Alpha Romanowsky knows so much about Jared and his family. Maybe Jared's family is higher up in the pack than he realised?

Looking forward to more :)

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sanshal March 23 2013, 19:21:18 UTC
Lol; me too(happy that is; about Jensen not taking up Jared on his offer)

And Jared's family's position... well; we'll get to that later.

Thanks for the lovely comment!
*hug*

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SPOILER TYPE QUESTION nighean_isis March 23 2013, 09:16:39 UTC
Ok, first, I've only been skimming the story while saving each section so I can read it all at once when it's complete. (I'm anal that way) hush. I don't mean *that* way. maybe.

So you might have actually mentioned this somewhere and I missed it, but I read this chapter and had to ask: Jensen's beta died in childbirth, didn't she? It makes sense and neatly explains the problem Jensen has with talking about her. That's my $.02 take on the situation.

Even if my speculation is wrong? You've got an intriguing and interesting story here and I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends.

Although, imho, Jared just needs to chill a bit more. That pride of his is going to be his downfall. And Jensen needs to stop with the secrets and come clean. Of course, if they did that, the story would be over. ;-)

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Re: SPOILER TYPE QUESTION sanshal March 23 2013, 19:19:54 UTC
First, THANK YOU!

And as far as your question is concerned, no; I ne'er mentioned Jensen's beta having died in childbirth. So, you're safe(from spoilers)....for now.
As far as what the boys need to do to set their life straight- I agree whole-heartedly. Lets hope they gain some sense; sooner rather than later.

Again; thanks for the awesome comment!
*hug*

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firesign10 March 30 2013, 01:57:06 UTC
Terrific update, a really absorbing story!

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sanshal March 30 2013, 20:08:29 UTC
Thank you!!!!!

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sanshal April 7 2013, 14:45:28 UTC
Thank you :-D

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