Comments | sansdatelimite: SPN, The one where Dean confesses, 1/1, PG13, Dean/Castiel, 2233

sansdatelimite

SPN, The one where Dean confesses, 1/1, PG13, Dean/Castiel, 2233

Oct 29, 2010 00:44

Title: The one where Dean confesses, part of the Take a Deep Breath ‘verse
Author: sephirothflame
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG13
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Dean Winchester x Castiel, Michael, Gabriel, Claire Novak, Anna Milton
Warning(s): HS!AU, direct references to partner betrayal
Spoiler(s): None
Prompt(s): hs_bingo, “break up,” table
Word Count: 2,223
Master List: ( Read more... )

verse: take a deep breath, fandom: supernatural, character: michael (archangel), pairing: castiel x dean, word count: 1.500 - 2.499, genre: angst, prompts: hs_bingo, !fanfiction, genre: au/ar, character: dean winchester, character: castiel (angel of thursday), warning: partner betrayal, character: gabriel (archangel/trickster), rating: pg13, type: slash

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sansdatelimite October 30 2010, 20:37:18 UTC

Yeah, Dean's been kind of an assbutt.

And yeah, Gabriel definitely does deserve to get hit.

Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks for commenting. :)

gunsrlove October 30 2010, 20:37:18 UTC

Poor, sweet Cas! I hope Dean's miserable! I still hope they get back together, but I hope Dean does a lot of suffering and groveling.

sansdatelimite October 30 2010, 20:41:05 UTC

Hee, yeah. Dean's going to have to be on his best behaviour for a while yet.

Thank you for commenting!

echelon_002 October 31 2010, 05:30:35 UTC

This was most satisfying, though slightly less than if Cas returned the favor by cheating on Dean. Preferably with Sam? *waves adulterer!Cas/Sassy support flag*

It's funny, I actually like Gabriel better than any of the Winchester brothers, so I'm very disappointed with him in this 'verse. But right now, Dean gets the brunt of my disgust, much like in canon. -__- (S5 seriously made me turn in my Dean-girl card--the last straw was the way he took advantage of a single mom and her young child.) I can't wait to see how Castiel puts him through hell for this.

baad51 December 4 2010, 17:44:21 UTC

This and the last chapter (the Crowley's party) torn me. I hate both Dean and Gabriel for what they did, but the sex was hot!! O_o me... And i'm agree with gedry, about the cheater'll always be a cheater. As much as i want Cas and Dean to be together (they were cute), (this just me) i don't think Dean's reason was acceptable. So yeah he's a teenager and horny and drunk, still don't justify cheating. With his lover's (boyfriend's?) brother no less. But I wish they will end up on a good ground though, all 3 of them.

(This is just my personal view, i mean no offence, 'cause i love this fic :p)

erasmus_fried January 24 2011, 09:08:43 UTC

So wow... I want to punch them in the face with my foot. I know that doesn't seem to make much sense but it does if your me. I'm afraid they must suffer. Perhaps Gabe and Dean could get crabs or something?

I usually believe that a cheater's gonna cheat but maybe Dean will be the exception that proves the rule. *puts on hope face dramatically* if not then I hope he rots alone...

love your fic