Comments | sansdatelimite: You Belong To Me -- N. Rush x Eli W -- PG-14

sansdatelimite

You Belong To Me -- N. Rush x Eli W -- PG-14

Nov 09, 2009 22:56

Title: You Belong To Me
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word count: 500 - 999, warning: pwp, pairing: chloe x scott, fandom: stargate universe, rating: pg14, kink: first time, !fanfiction, pairing: eli x rush, character: eli wallace, type: slash, character: nicholas rush

Comments 12

theeverdream November 10 2009, 05:50:56 UTC

Oh I just ADORE this! Rush is so great in his manipulativeness, and I can so totally see him just hating what he views as unnecessary emotional drama.

sansdatelimite November 10 2009, 17:45:37 UTC

I know, right? Rush is fantastic.

Thanks for reading. <3

chozen_rogue November 10 2009, 07:29:01 UTC

Oh how I adore manipulative!Rush. This was so in character for him and for Eli, really beautiful in a brutal kind of way. Just want to hug Eli.

sansdatelimite November 10 2009, 17:47:14 UTC

I love manipulative!Rush. >w<

Thanks so much for reading. <3

sexycazzy November 10 2009, 09:20:18 UTC

I can just about imagine Rush as a manipulative man! Poor Eli! :)) this is really good!

sansdatelimite November 10 2009, 17:48:49 UTC

Poor Eli indeed! He likes it though (probably 'cause he doesn't realize Rush's motives...) ;)

Thanks for reading. <3

themadpuppy November 10 2009, 23:28:19 UTC

I love this. Already when I was viewing the episode I could think of Rush rolling his eyes later in the series when Eli would mop about Chloe or be distracted because of it. And that he plans to use sex to bind Eli to him...oh evil Rush, you're the best!<3

sansdatelimite November 11 2009, 00:11:00 UTC

Yes. Yes he is. Also, it's nice to know I'm not the only one to have these thoughts. xD

meikitsune November 11 2009, 04:21:36 UTC

<3 I turned to my friend with this incredulous look on my face, and she asked me what it was, so I made her read the second to last paragraph and she understood.

Your writing is soooo blunt, I love it <3

sansdatelimite November 11 2009, 04:28:51 UTC

Hahaha, thank you? You're wording confuses me, but I think this is a good thing. I like that paragraph... Hahaha.

Either way, thanks for reading and commenting. <3

meikitsune November 11 2009, 04:40:55 UTC

That paragraph alone was so awesome, I had a surprised/pleased look on my face and she asked me why I was freaking out. So she read the paragraph and she understood.

You're awesome

sansdatelimite November 11 2009, 04:43:58 UTC

Ahhh, okay. That makes sense, hahaha. I shouldn't try to comprehend others after a 36 hour day. I'm awfully glad y'all liked it. <3

Hahaha, I am pretty awesome. /jk xD

Thanks x1,000,000