Comments | sansdatelimite: Story of a Girl, One-Sided Molly x Adam, PG

sansdatelimite

Story of a Girl, One-Sided Molly x Adam, PG

Dec 09, 2007 16:33

Title: Story of a Girl
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verse: story of a girl, character: molly walker, pairing: adam x molly, kink: unrequited, word count: 1.500 - 2.499, character: adam monroe, !fanfiction, genre: au/ar, genre: domestic/food, fandom: heroes, pairing: matt x mohinder, genre: gen, genre: fluff, rating: pg

Comments 3

sachiela January 7 2008, 03:16:51 UTC

Well written, I will definitely say that. Only a few times did I want to get picky about the commas and semi-colons, but it's just personal opinion. otherwise really good, if a bit depressing.

sephirothflame January 11 2008, 22:09:36 UTC

I happen to like commas... and OMG, did I use a Semi-colon? Or should I have? I think they're redundant pieces of fake grammer, so I tend not to use them...

flareonfury March 16 2008, 14:23:08 UTC

I loved it! I never would have thought of this pairing... great job!