Mommy!Leo Epicfic Part zee Secondeth!

[sanjuno]

Wheee! I did it! I actually managed to get a fic done when I said I would. I'm proud of myself, yes I am.

Anyway, I should probably warn you that this chapter is a little bit darker than the last one, but it's important to the plot! Really! It's not just because I like to torture Leo!

Oh, just read the silly thing.

Comments

[lvsinsanity]

"if this woman intended to wipe them from existence then they were going to have words."

*can't stop laughing*

Oh my Lords!! This was hilarious! You're style of writing is really different from what I see in the fanfiction world, I ADORE it! It's just so flowing, imaginative and visual!!

I love how you take all these different realities and make them work! And the ending, where you let us know what child is what, that helps a lot, but the little quotes? PERFECT! ^___________^

[sanjuno]

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked the imagery, I consider it my strongest writing skill to be truthful.

Yeah, I am the cross-canon queen! Bow to me! And I figured that people could probably do with a little reminder of who is who. I'm glad that you like the fic and my writing style, thanks again for reading!

[g33kg1rl]

so cute!!! XD i NEVER would have thought of Titian being added to the mix! (totally agree with you on the fire extinguisher stuff; that was such a weak plot idea). but soooo adorable! a lil' baby-baby turtle! :D that was great stuff!

though i gotta admit, when Leo ran into the 'secrets of the ooze' turtles in the rave warehouse, I was hoping he would fight them because they had Venus and Tokka. I kinda wanted him to wipe the floor on all three of them, save Venus and the baby and then sorta continue standing guard as the otherworld turtles realized "hey... do you think we need to practice more?" :D but that's just me. I LOVED LEo making that trilling chirp sound and all the boys scampering to his side. that image is just the cutest thing in the world world!!!!

loved this chapter! :) i can't wait for there to be more! thanks for updating! this deffinitely makes having to go to work this afternoon so much better. thanks! keep up the awesome work!

~Melissa the Damgel

[sanjuno]

Titian is adorable. And Fire extinguishers are just writing short-cuts, yo.

Nah, this Leo isn't the type to actually fight any version of his brothers without a good reason. But yeah, I'm having a lot of fun with Leo's mommy sounds.

More will be up soon-ish. The next interlude for sure, but part three is going to take some doing. Leo's a bit disgruntled in the next part, so he;s not being very cooperative. XD

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! ^_^

[madwriter223]

Wait, Leo was sent away to a more stable universe, but what about the kids? Did they go too?

[sanjuno]

Yep, that they did. ^_^ They were teleported right along with Leo.

Wait until you see how the kids react to people hitting on their mommy. It isn't pretty. Funny, yes, but not pretty.

[madwriter223]

[rubs hands in glee] Can't wait!!

[sanjuno]

^_^ I'm glad you're loking forward to it! Mwahaha.

[sanjuno]

Yay! <3

[polaris2000]

'The unholy love child of Raphael and Traximus' I was HOWLING when I read that!!!! HOWLING, I tell you! You are brilliant, and I can't wait for more, and I possibly love you. Hi.

[sanjuno]

I figured people would appreciate the imagery. ^.^ Thanks for the compliments! And ooh, I get love!

Score! 7-love!

Hi.