Comments | sanjuno: The Mommy!Leo Epicfic, Part zee Firsteth!

sanjuno

The Mommy!Leo Epicfic, Part zee Firsteth!

Jan 26, 2008 19:58

Oooookaay. This is... rough. I mean reeeeeally, really rough. I mean, some parts still read like summaries and some parts aren't quite... in character. Or all that clear about what's going on, even. Some parts really reflect my more-that-slightly satirical sense of humour, and I'm not sure about wither some of the beginning parts project the kind ( Read more... )

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sanjuno January 28 2008, 13:14:47 UTC

*Glee!* I am loved!

(Dances with you.)

I'm glad you liked it, because this is NOT by best writing. And more is on the way. (I think I watched a total of three episodes of Next Mutation, soo... I'm kinda neutral about Venus. (I just couldn't keep watching after seeing the chi/qui-gong techniques called "Shinobi magic/arts". I was all; STUPID WRITERS! SHINOBI IS THE SAME THING AS NINJA! RAWR! and refused to watch any more. But the statue thing was cute.))

Score 1-love

tea_redneck January 27 2008, 03:41:15 UTC

This is utterly adorable and I hope you write more soon! Leo as a mom is just the cutest thing ever.

tea_redneck January 27 2008, 04:20:03 UTC

Oh, forgot to mention something. You mentioned Splinter/Casey's Mom...just from that mention, it is now my crack OTP. The idea of it is just adorable. Yes, this has me babbling and over-using the word "adorable". But it is! ^_^

sanjuno January 28 2008, 13:22:52 UTC

Splinter/Casey's Mom deserves it's own SONG, it is made of so much win... and crack. But yeah, Ninja Rat Meet Wrestlemainia Mom, it's a match made in crack. But YES it is adorable. And I was all like " ... Dude, Splinter? Why are you giving Mrs. Jones flowers?"

This pairing was totally inspired by two episodes, the first was the episode where we MEET Mrs. Jones, and the second was the one where Casey is taking dating advice from Splinter. "I knew the flowers were a good idea. XD"

tea_redneck January 28 2008, 13:31:15 UTC

I just love Casey's Mom from the episode you meet her. I love that last scene. "What's the deal with the giant rat and turtle?" They're ninja masters and they still couldn't sneak around her. Too damn awesome.

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sanjuno January 28 2008, 13:30:52 UTC

I glad you liked it, and you will be seeing more soon! ^_^

polaris2000 January 27 2008, 04:05:37 UTC

I think I love you as well. This is SO CUTE! I'm lovin' the turtle tots, and agreed, Venus NOT sucking is the accomplishment of the century. Can't wait for the next part!!!

sanjuno January 28 2008, 13:35:00 UTC

Heehee. *sappy grin* Isn't it though? The Turtle Tots are so much fun, because I don't really need to focus too much on them right now, because Leo's all focused on suviving long enough to be rescued. But once he manages to find a safe place... OMG the cute.

And what is with the hatin' on Venus? It's not HER fault she had crap writers. Besides, that's when writers of greater caliber should step up to the plate and save the poor, mistreated characters from fandom infamy. XP

Next part coming soon!

Score: 2-love

harmonde January 27 2008, 04:18:48 UTC

Of course, that is when the earth decided to open up and swallow them both.

This killed me because it was so random. "Emotional moment, moving dialogue - DIMENSIONAL TEAR RAWR"

And mommy!Leo is my new favorite character. You are officially made of awesome.

sanjuno January 28 2008, 13:42:42 UTC

Yay! It's this fics first casualty! LOL The random was there to a) keep Leo off balance, and b) make it so Venus-chan will forevermore call him Mama... and maybe just a little bit because I can only handle so much sap at once.

Mommy!Leo FTW! And here I always thought I was made of flesh and bone and blood and squishy purplish-pink bits that go blorp-blorp I like being made of awesome. Especially when it's official. ^______________^