"I've got more legs than a bucket of chicken!"

[sanjuno]

Title: The Nine Rings of Vos
A Transformers G1 Fanfic
Author: Sanjuno Shori Niko
Summary: The Rainmaker's are carrying. A bit more than they think. Starscream is not amused by any of it.
Timeline: More fic is here.

Comments

I are the spotter of the inconsistancy!

[zatnik]

In "In which Turbine says 'we have a problem'": In Seeker-cant Turbine continued the sentence, ~ “We have a small problem with the Rainmaker Trine.”~

In this part: “Tell me what’s going on.” Starscream demanded, his engine growling to underscore the impatience of his words, “What sort of trouble have which idiots gotten themselves into and how bad is it?”

I love Seekercant.

Re: I are the spotter of the inconsistancy!

[sanjuno]

Ah, in that Starscream wants to know which member of the trine was the one that started it. Seekers tend to see trines as a collective entity, so saying 'Acidstorm is in trouble' is the same as syaing 'the Rainmakers are in trouble' and vice-versa.

Re: I are the spotter of the inconsistancy!

[zatnik]

"which idiots"? Hrm... If you say so. I didn't notice it the first time I read this collection, actually.

Re: I are the spotter of the inconsistancy!

[sanjuno]

Meh, I'll mess with it and fix it up during the compilation edit before I post this to FF.Net. XP As it is I'm writing this out of sequence, so there will be mistakes here and there.

Tell me if this link works, cause this is how I see the chapter ending.

[ditzymusiclover]

http://tf-screen-caps.150m.com/caps/poutingscreamer.jpg

Bingo!

[sanjuno]

*snickers* That is very much how the chapter ends. XD

The link doesn't work. But I got to see it through Snap.