[Writing] A new day dawns

[sanity_cheque]

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[heldc]

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[taurus_rising]

Is this the opener? Good start if it is. Nice introduction and the information dump is woven nicely into the action. And the Wierd Event is well timed to hook!

[sanity_cheque]

This is actually the latest entry in the story. If you hit the Demonic U tag, the first entry is the one at the very bottom, then read up from there.