Comments | sanguineus: lonely eyes and hard goodbyes (angst/PG-13)

sanguineus

lonely eyes and hard goodbyes (angst/PG-13)

Jan 02, 2006 17:50

Title:: lonely eyes and hard goodbyes
Author:: sanguineus
Rating:: PG-13
Summary:: Mmm, SasuNaru. Just a little. It's more sad than romantic. x.o Not very long, kinda nice themes.
Notes:: Guhm, spoiler warning for... well, ep. 100s+ I guess and books 20+. So be cautious. Nothing major or unexpected, though. ;.; Sai isn't in this story but I ( Read more... )

shounen-ai, fic, naruto, sasunaru

Comments 12

anonymous January 23 2006, 06:51:32 UTC

My goodness. You are up-and-coming and everything in between left, right, back, and front...over valleys and plains, and into ravines and caves. Hehe. Now you just knew your Naruto/Gaara fic'd make me strut on over here. Your writing reminds me so much of gelfling's. Good stuff with even better characterizations, and plots no military could blast outta the sky with even formidable firepower. Very good. Might I recommend you to 'Hidden Village'? Dunno if you've heard of it, but, there are lots o' yummy Naruto fics posted there that are worth the time and effort finagling over horrible dial-up internet connections--like mine. I was referring to me. ^^ But anyway, my dear, you are in the big leagues. You really are. You can contend with some of the best. Again, excellent stuff. Word up. Now, I know it's late at night, and you may think this is the time I stalk best, but rest assured, I don't stalk. I only pick up on raw and natural talent and find a moment out of my pathetic life to give some mad props to those who ( ... )

sanguineus January 24 2006, 03:28:27 UTC

Wow, you are so nice! :D I am properly speechless. It really does make me so happy that you like my fanfiction :3

Is Hidden Village an LJ comm?

anonymous January 24 2006, 05:15:21 UTC

Must. Link. You! You person who's been in some dark and stinky cave for far too long! *thwaps you briskly with dried twigs* Brace your eyes for the light, homes. Boy, is it bright out here! Ahem, onward to Hidden Village ( ... )

anonymous March 4 2006, 16:40:18 UTC

Oi, dude. My bad. Been a while since I popped a holla at you. Been chomping down on mad busy since the last time I commented here. Anyhoo, I finally got around to sending your stuff to JBMcDragon's Hidden Village. Sent her the two fics--this 'un and 'Parallels'. Also, the two drabbles that you got. They ain't got no title--you never designated any for them, so, if you could do me a favor and throw something together so I could get back to JB about posting those up, hopefully, that'd be right cool. Aight, now. Gotta run till next time. One.

Aspy

PS- Saw your donation thing. Wish I could help, but I don't know you at all...and besides, I'm broke as shit from school and bills as it is. Sorry. Hope you get to go, though. Try maybe pawning something? Just an idea. Peace up.

sanguineus March 7 2006, 01:18:09 UTC

Don't feel bad about the donation thing :P ^.^ It was just a thought, and I completely understand.

About the drabbles--the gaara/lee one can be called "pain on the inside of people" and the other trippy thing can be "how long it will last"

I hope those are satisfactory ^_^

Sorry it took so long, I've been sicky... eh... ;.;

jbmcdragon March 8 2006, 01:47:12 UTC

Another beautiful story. These are really well done; very gut-wrenching, in this case. May I also archive this? (And you may hear from me again. *grins*)

JB

sanguineus March 8 2006, 04:10:26 UTC

Hah, you can archive all of my Naruto stuff. :D I'm glad it's getting such positive feedback! It makes me want to finish the one sitting on my computer right now... x.x I will make the effort.

:D But yes, short answer, archive your heart out :D!

I feel you should know that I go to Hidden Village all the time in the mornings at school and print out porny stories to read during the day instead of taking notes or otherwise learning. ^__________^ I was our Media Center's paper like crazy, and it's wonderful.

jbmcdragon March 12 2006, 01:26:44 UTC

Ummm... I can't find those two drabbles I asked about. *cringe* May I archive those? And do they have titles?

JB

sanguineus March 12 2006, 06:58:30 UTC

The gaara/lee one is here: http://sanguineus.livejournal.com/18375.html#cutid1

The trippy dream sequence thing is here:http://sanguineus.livejournal.com/17620.html#cutid1 Haha, this was the first Naruto thing I ever wrote XDD

the gaara/lee one can be called "pain on the inside of people" and the other trippy thing can be "how long it will last"

Thread 6

anonymous March 12 2006, 19:35:55 UTC

JB's made it over to you, I see. Great! Now you can deal with her directly instead of waiting on my very lazy ass to forward anything. Ehh, regardless, she's put me to work as a ninja, so, out of my busy schedule, I have possibly shitloads to do for the great Dragon. :-) But this is a good thing that she's made contact. Excellent. Send those drabble titles to her if you can, 'cause I forgot, really. Begging your pardon. Now, be warned, JB usually doesn't read/like drabbles, but, if you can secure a place in her heart with yours, think of it as being on cloud ten--sweet and happy cloud ten. Well, I gotta run, the morgue calleth. One.

Aspy

PS- Check out some of Hey-Diddle-Diddle's drabbles, over which JB simply raves. Good stuff.