Days of Saturn 1/1 (mirrorverse)

[sanguefic]

title: Days of Saturn
fandom: ST xi (mirrorverse)
pairing: MU!Kirk/MU!McCoy, MU!Kirk/MU!Pike, MU!Pike/MU!McCoy,
rating: nc-17
word count: ~ 10, 350 complete

summary:The Academy - It’s the winter solstice, bang in the middle of the week long Saturnalia celebrations. McCoy was hoping to keep out of trouble by working double shifts at the hospital

Comments

[ksalterego]

holey frikken cow! this is amazing! the psych and the games and the sheer WTFfery is absolutely brilliant! waiting and hoping for more!!!!

[sangueuk]

Thank you for the lovely fb! I don't know if there will be more - it all depends if some random idea insists on being written at some point but I would love to revisit this verse! I still feel that McCoy has a lot of 'getting to know you' to do re Kirk. And won't that be fun?

[ksalterego]

um.......YES

:D

[weepingnaiad]

Damn, bb! You know how to hit all my buttons, don't you? I love Pike here, he's the perfect Mirror Version of himself, sexy, badass, dangerous, with just that smidge of compassion and true concern for Jim. And that teasing hint of Pike/George... you know how much I ship them!

Dear, adorable, oblivious McCoy is wonderful as ever. I still adore how he'd trained himself to physically and viscerally react to Jim and Jim made that training 'stick' by removing himself from the picture. Made poor Bones suffer.

I love when they have a connection that could fell them both, but they actually become just that much stronger together.

Wonderful as ever, m'dear!

♥♥♥

[sangueuk]

Pike/George - mmm, yes please! Nearly as hot as Pike/Boyce which I'm suddenly all over ;D

I think Jim making Bones suffer wasn't intentional - more that he was unwilling to have his interest in Bones exposed but, yeah, it kept poor Bones on the knife edge :D

I love when they have a connection that could fell them both, but they actually become just that much stronger together. I love how you put this - oh boys, the things you do to us fangirls!

So glad you liked this, bb since the prompt was yours originally - I hope you'll forgive me for going my own way!

Days of Saturn

[dody08]

Oh man, best present ever. This is so amazing. The struggle McCoy goes through to overcome his self-training mistakenly thinking he had failed in piquing Kirk's interest was fascinating. Such a brilliant set up. I really, really enjoyed Kirk at the end refusing to learn Pike's lesson; refusing even the idea of sharing McCoy.

Re: Days of Saturn

[sangueuk]

Oh man, best present ever. So glad, thank you!

I really, really enjoyed Kirk at the end refusing to learn Pike's lesson; refusing even the idea of sharing McCoy. I'm glad this worked for you - Jim will always do things his own way and, much as he wants to learn from his mentor!

Thanks for reading :D

[kimuracarter]

So hot. Delicious!

[sangueuk]

Thank you!

[severinne]

First off, thank you so much for posting this baby to AO3, meant I could download it to my e-Reader and sneak it in throughout my afternoon. On the other hand, once I started I found myself wandering around the house doing all my tidying half-assed and one-handed as I couldn't put my reader down and then I just had to sit down because holy fuck hotness omg yes. *g*

Your mirrorverse is lighter than some I've read but still downright sinister; humour aside, the way Pike and Kirk and even McCoy think and act very much nails that point home. And while I've got a hardwired Pike/McCoy OTP living in my head, filled with genuine affection and all that, I still found the idea of Pike giving McCoy a coldly indifferent fuck on his desk, just to prove a point to Kirk, really ridiculously fucking hot. And of course, the genuine affection between Kirk and McCoy and their mutual interdependence was an incredible bonus. Loved just about everything about this, basically, so thank you for sharing!

[sangueuk]

I really appreciate you coming back and commenting when you were reading on your e-reader; I sometimes take weeks to getting round to doing that - thank you!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you found it 'sinister'; I wanted to give the MU my own twist and I appreciate feedback that suggests some of what I've done may be working at least :D

Also, desk sex for the win!