The Look - (mirrorverse) - 1/1

[sanguefic]

Title: The Look, 1/1 - mirrorverse (AOS)
Rating: nc-17
Character/Pairing: mirror!Kirk/mirror!McCoy,
Wordcount: approx 7,600 words (complete)
Summary: Jim teaches McCoy a lesson in gratitude. Thing is, will McCoy get it and change his ways? This is for the 2011 km_anthology prompt - ‘public sex’.

Warnings: Threat of death to major character, dubious consent

Comments

[sangueuk]

Goodness, it took me a while to respond to this because a)you like it and I'm all flaily and b) your icon - unf. It perfectly matches the mood I was trying to create!

Thank you so much, bb - yeah, McCoy refuses to shut up, bless him. Jim's going to have to work a lot harder to keep him in line ;D

[vivid_moment]

After the day I've had, I felt like just crawling under my duvet when I got home. Don't have it in me to say how happy I am for ditching that idea to read this instead, because this was just ... HOLY MOTHER OF HOTNESS! *whump* Can't seem find the proper words just now, aside from your always write creative, ingenious stories. Especially when, after all that, they're yet to kiss. If I had to write down my top 5 kinks, not kissing would be one of them. Having such intensity and just - well, THIS in a fic, and not having shared a kiss is like ... magic! I'm just ... exhausted now. But in the best of ways. That was perfectly wonderful, hunnie *glomps you* *then waves my coherancy bye-bye* ...

[sangueuk]

If I had to write down my top 5 kinks, not kissing would be one of them. - I'm interpreting this as 'but they WILL kiss eventually and my panties will combust and my heart go ping'? It's certainly what I'm like with the kissing :D

To know this cheered you up when you felt low makes every moment of writing it worth while, thank you so much, darling. *hugs*

[vivid_moment]

Yep, that's exactly it. It EXACTLY, bb ;) *pets your lovely, liked-minded brain*

It's kinda weird because it's not exactly the 'joyest' of fics, in the literal sense, but it certainly cheered me up *grins* aww, you're welcome, hunnie. And Thank YOU so much, again *snuggles*

[soldierly]

Oh wow, I loved this. Their relationship is wonderfully twisted and gorgeous.

[sangueuk]

Thank you, it's so lovely of you to say this! *beams*

[savoytruffle]

I love how they both want the same thing so desperately, even if neither of them can seem to find an easy way to get it from each other. Mirrorverse to a T.

[sangueuk]

Mirrorverse to a T. For reals? Thank you so much, bb, this means a lot!

[avictoriangirl]

Oh, bb. You know me, I'm not big on mirror!verse, but I really liked this, A LOT. I love the power play here and how each of them really just wanted the same thing, but didn't realize it. And of course now you have me dying for a sequel to see if they ever make it to the next step of kissing. ;)

[sangueuk]

I'm flattered that this worked for you even though it's not your usual bag, thank you!

Kissing? In the MU? Perish the thought.
I may or may not be working on something along those lines, not related to this fic, but also MU, shhhh.