comment!fic - Re-union

[sanguefic]

Title: Reunion 1/1
Rating: nc-17
Character/Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Wordcount: approx 1000 words complete
Summary: in the afterglow, Jim kisses Bones - PWP
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: not mine, I wish they were, but they really aren’t.
Author’s notes: un’beta’d comment!fic inspired by the gorgeous black and white kissing photos on jim_and_bones ’s Semi-weekly Man on

Comments

[thistlerose]

Ohhh, this is gorgeous, bb. I love the unhurried sensuality, the fact that Jim is so obviously smitten.

[sangueuk]

Thank you so much! I really made an effort to slow this down, to make it about the little things, so I'm glad that came across!

Also, I am such a fail - I forgot to cp the first 200 words of this fic! Now remedied. So, you only saw two thirds of it! That’ll teach me to post late at night when I should be asleep.

[supasass]

Not only is this sexy as hell, but achingly beautiful too, and evokes the senses of all loving relationships, the smitteness, the comfort of a loved lover and the intimacy between them is so amazing.

[sangueuk]

This is an incredible comment and had me grinning from ear to ear - yes, I was really going for the intimacy and I'm thrilled it worked for you! Thanks for letting me know :D

I am such a fail - I forgot to cp the first 200 words of this fic! Now remedied. So, you only saw two thirds of it! That’ll teach me to post late at night when I should be asleep. I’ve added this to all comments before I noticed - hope you don’t mind!

[supasass]

Hahaha! That's hilarious. I almost feel I don't need to see the beginning because you brought out the emotions and sensations so well with only 2/3rds of the intended text... :p

[sangueuk]

Yeah, it is funny, I am such a fucking plonker *rolls eyes* ;D I'm thinking it would be best if I always, always posted my fics for my eyes only and left them for 24 hours, then released them into the wilds after that to prevent these all too common fuck-ups. But I have trigger finger!

Thanks again for your lovely words, bb! *hugs*

[pomme_noir]

That was down right poetry. I really love the line:
Jim fans his fingers across skin which half a day ago tasted fresh air, that experienced things without him
It really struck me. Beautifully done.

[sangueuk]

I love it when readers point out specific lines, thank you! I really worked hard on this, but I wish I'd spent longer refining it. I'm thrilled you liked it, thank you! I am such a fail - I forgot to cp the first 200 words of this fic! Now remedied. So, you only saw two thirds of it! That’ll teach me to post late at night when I should be asleep. I’ve added this to all comments before I noticed - hope you don’t mind!

[spikeface]

Mmmm, good kissing is such fun to read and surprisingly rare (and difficult to write, in my experience) -- I loved that you took your time with it here. And sleepy!Bones and inlove!Jim are my favorite. :-D

[sangueuk]

I'm glad it worked - I have such a kissing!kink it's not even funny and I'm determined to crack the mystery of writing it! I don't think I'm anywhere close but I'm pleased with some aspects, definitely! Thank you for the lovely comment! I am such a fail - I forgot to cp the first 200 words of this fic! Now remedied. So, you only saw two thirds of it! That’ll teach me to post late at night when I should be asleep. I’ve added this to all comments before I noticed - hope you don’t mind!

[joirerson]

Ooh, hello again! I love it when you do comment!fic, I do so look forward to Thursdays' installments especially. ;)

[sangueuk]

Well, I only managed to do comment!fic maybe three or four times last year. This lovely comment will spur me on to try and get more up, thanks! I am such a fail - I forgot to cp the first 200 words of this fic! Now remedied. So, you only saw two thirds of it! That’ll teach me to post late at night when I should be asleep. I’ve added this to all comments before I noticed - hope you don’t mind!