FIC: PG - Space Dust

[sanguefic]

Title: space dust 1/1
Author: sangueuk
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing: Jim Kirk (AOS), gen
Wordcount: approx 1,500 words complete
Summary: some hours after the Nerada, Jim’s alone for the first time
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: I mean no offence and court no profits,
Author’s notes: This was written in response to challenge # 9 at st11forxi - There and Back Again

Comments

[easilymused1956]

I'm thinking of this as a mometary character study. Yeah. I wonder what he'll be like in a year?

Absolutely lovely.

Renee

[sangueuk]

I can't wait to find out, from the next movie, exactly what he'll be like in a year. Definitely awesome but I hope they take one or two breaks from the action and take time for some introspection.

Thank you for reading, bb!

[sail_aweigh]

This is going to go down as my head canon for Jim, now. That image of him naked in front of the window is mesmerizing. I do hope you draw it, bb!

[sangueuk]

This is going to go down as my head canon for Jim, now this comment definitely gave me goosebumps! *blushes*

Thank you so much!

(I adore that icon - he looks so bloody cute!)

[laughter_now]

This is an absolutely brilliant insight into Jim's head, and so rounded and coherent that there's not a single thing about which one could say "oh, but that contradicts what we've seen in the movie". It just makes sense, his thoughts and feelings, the little things he gives away about himself by what he thinks and how he reacts.
And the imagery is just beautiful. The image of Jim standing in front of the window is surely going to stay with me for a long time, and for once it has nothing to do with my downstairs-brain and the fact that you used the word 'naked' in describing that scene.

Thanks so much for sharing this!

[sangueuk]

I loved this comment! Thank you for telling me exactly why you liked it - I'm all warm and smoshy now! *blushes*

For once, I steered entirely clear of the 'naughty' and I'm glad I did. I wanted him to be 'open', transformed, you know...

Thank you for your lovely words!

[thistlerose]

We know what we are, but not what we may be. Oh, Jim. He's so raw here, so open with himself. I love it. What a gorgeous, telling missing scene this is.

[sangueuk]

He's so raw here, so open with himself. Poor, Jim, indeed but I hope I managed to convey that he's humble too.

Thank you for reading!

[danahid]

Heartbreaking and lovely.

[sangueuk]

Thank you!