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[sangomeister]

 I'd really appreciate it if you guys gave me comments on it because this is my second fic I'm writing. The first one was "Midnight Melody" but I didn't get a lot of comments. I would appreciate it if you guys told me what you think, I think it would help!! ^_^

Title: Innocence is Always Unsuspicious
Rating: G
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Pairings/Characters

Comments

[5pristinepetals]

Whoa! I enjoyed reading this a lot! This story made me laugh, and I love the ending. The characters are also right on. No OOCness or anything. The beginning was perfect, I love your choice of words like I must forgo my own oblivion and "turbulent reverie".

I have to say my favourite part was when the twins were teasing him about being a pervert and taunting him by touching Haruhi XDDD I could just imagine them doing that, and Tamaki's enraged expression!!

[sangomeister]

THANKS!!!! The twin tease is one of my faves too b/c i imagined it a well. I think when i write it's like it is playing in my head... strange but works!!! Thanks for the comment ♥

[elenar]

Great! :D

[sangomeister]

♥ ^_^

[itsplashes]

First of all, TamakixHaruhi is &hearts! :D

That aside, I thought this was a very enjoyable read. So sweet. And all the characters were written true to their anime counterparts. :)

[sangomeister]

THANKS! I appreciate the comment! and i do agree tamakiXharuhi is ♥ ^_^ and your icon is ♥

wow

[phoenix_159]

wow that was great! i really enjoyed it! can you do anotherone please? lol

Re: wow

[sangomeister]

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥ ♥ ♥ You are too sweet! And yes I shall, I'm glad you liked it!!!