Falling

[sangate]

A loud yell echoed through the hallway as Colonel John Sheppard fell down the metal stairs.

“Sheppard!” Ronon shouted after him, jumping a few stairs at a time to get to his teammate. Moaning came from a few metres down where John lay with his eyes closed. “Sheppard!” Ronon shouted again. “Stay with me!”

“Hurts,” was all John could let

Comments

[x_erikah_x]

*happy whumpy sigh*

That was nice for a quiet Sunday.

[sangate]

LOL that seems to be the general consensus, also on ff, people wanting more :D Problem is that I did write more, but I suck at infirmary scenes :S So I deleted it :o Might take another approach to it though.. will have to wait and see what my brain comes up with, so who knows :P No promises though ;)

From Steve Austin

[sidhartinas]

Nice!!!

You know how to do it...you should try something else:) you know, like a ..certain tag from ...say...The Lost Tribe in which he barely survives the entire gate room explosion, ans saves Zelenka in the process....

He! or you could expand the stair fall...as Listy suggested :P

In any case, thank you.

Re: From Steve Austin

[sangate]

Thanks :) As I said to Listy above, I tried to write the infirmary scene, but that didn't work out all that well, so I left it out.

Definately want to write more tags though, so you'll see them appear. Eventually :P

[0_lily_0]

Very nice! Poor Sheppy. And glassless-Zelenka! *chuckles* Lovely fic.