Criminal Minds Fic

[saneoblivion]

A new criminal minds fic.
Not very coherent i fear, drifting between reflective and comedy. Anyway. Please read. Life's a learning curve, right?

Title: 3 Weeks and a Tell Tale Sign
Pairing: Emily/JJ
Rating: PG 13
Disclaimer: Characters are mine, all mine, hahahaha NOT MINE (sobs). Please don't sue me. No infringement intended.

Feedback is much

Comments

[soporificeffect]

:D

[fewthistle]

This was quite lovely! Really. I enjoyed the interaction between Em and JJ, and the knowing teasing of Morgan and Garcia. Very nice piece! Welcome to the fandom!!

One suggestion? Give a hard break (a double space) between paragraphs and dialogue just for an easier read *g*.

[thrace_]

Okay, I was a little iffy on the formatting of the paragraphs, but that last line made it worth it.

[lanapana]

I really like this :-D I love when Garcia is in a JJ/Emily fic. I thought the shirt thing was very funny.
Congrats on figuring out how to make a cut.. Now, could you explain it to me? Cause I have a story, I just can't figure out how to make the darn cut... lol..

[saneoblivion]

yay.
thankyou so much for all the lovely feedback.

thanks for the tips on formatting fewthistle, ill bear that in mind.
I love the last line too. It came to me last night fter i watched an old episode of Criminal Minds (pre-Prentiss) and i couldn't wait to use it!