Comments | sandymg: may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach, RPS, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG], (Beach Verse)

sandymg

may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach, RPS, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG], (Beach Verse)

Jan 03, 2017 18:35

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fanfiction, established relationship, jensen/jared, jared padalecki, j2, rps, fanfic, jensen ackles, au, fandom: supernatural, beach verse, author: sandymg

Comments 6

borgmama1of5 January 4 2017, 02:53:02 UTC

Lines like this ...lets the paper unfold like an origami in reverse and this ...and the paper unfold like the petals of a flower are one of the many reasons why I love this story!

sandymg January 4 2017, 04:02:55 UTC

Thank you! Especially for urging me to not give up on this one :)

mdlaw January 4 2017, 03:02:19 UTC

My heart squeezed, but for a entirely different reason this time. m :)

sandymg January 4 2017, 04:03:39 UTC

Thank you for reading for commenting each time. It means so much. <3

zubeneschamali January 5 2017, 03:39:00 UTC

"After a deep breath, he answers, “Because you surround my heart. And Jay … “ Fills it. He swallows hard because if he says one more word then he will start to cry."

Maybe Jensen didn't cry, but I sure did. That was beautiful. All of it.

sandymg January 5 2017, 04:16:33 UTC

Thank you. If anyone deserved a really nice proposal it was Jared in this verse :) I thought it important also to show how far Jensen has really come.