a bowl of dark water, rinsing your face, RPS, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG], (Beach Verse)

[sandymg]

Comments

[tebtosca]

Ahhhhhhhh just catching up with this verse and you leave us on that cliffhanger! Jensen's mother is just so toxic and terrible, and now it seems like Jensen is going to try and push Danneel away too, maybe? And poor Jared in the rain, guy can't catch a break haha

[sandymg]

Sorry about the cliffhanger. There was just too much left to wrap it up yet. But I'm delighted that you are continuing to read and enjoy the story. I hope very much to be able to write more.

[annabuffy]

Oh Jensen, after so many years you finally let your mother win. When will he learn to stop trying to justify her cruel and controlling personality and finally stand up for himself. My heart is breaking that he's letting Jared go and will probably let Danni go also. I've started my day on a very sad note. :(

[sandymg]

I'm sorry for the sad tone of this installment. I did feel like we needed to go a little lower before things could start turning around. The verse is not finished. There will be continuations and prequels to come.

[onlythefireborn]

So happy whenever you publish a new story - and that you have resumed this 'verse pleases me so deeply, even given how sad this is right now (it is just for right now, yes? please

[sandymg]

Thank you for your long and thoughtful comment. I really appreciate it and find it inspiring to keep writing. This is not the story's end and you are right that it will take quite a lot for Jensen to develop into his own person, outside of his mother's very strong personality.

[imaginecoolname]

God, this verse is so beautiful and heartbreaking! Thank you for your fantastic, evocative writing.

It pains me so much to see Donna's manipulations so clearly, yet Jensen being too conditioned to see her toxicity for what it is. I really hope Jared (and Danneel) won't be driven away so easily, that they'll be able to catch on to what is really going on, and that Jensen will finally see and fight for himself and his loved ones. Please fix this, I so want the boys to get their happy ending! *sniffles*

[sandymg]

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'd forgotten how amazing it feels to get good feedback. I will come back to these boys ... I always do. So this will definitely not be where the story ends.

[mdlaw]

His mother made him give away his stuffed bunnny! I understand she was trying to make him strong, but no. m :/

[sandymg]

I felt the need to get back to the stuffed bunny as it was previously featured. I'm glad that you felt it was impactful. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. That is always appreciated.