Now who's writing stealth? ;) But really, I am oh so happy to read this (writing the sad really brought it on, you know?). I love them being all schmoopy and needy and funny and sarcastic.
My favorite parts:
A pout of Padalecki proportions was thrown his way. “Har-har. This is your not-so-subtle-way to tell me I’ve been on Twitter too much.”
“If the twit fits.”
and
He felt frustrated and slightly embarrassed and he’d be damned if he’d let on that he was feeling rejected for having a romantic idea.
and so much of this:
He’d spun his body away defensively but Jared’s strong grip was turning him back around. He pulled him deeper into the shadow of the alcove. Lips brushed his temple.
“I’m a selfish bastard, aren’t I?” Jensen murmured into Jared’s neck.
“Actually you’re not. You rarely ask for anything.” Jared pulled away and his eyes glowed a burnished gold in the dim light.
How'd you get so much delightfulness into 780 words?
BTW ... this isn't the only prompt that caught my eye. I wrote something else but after discussion with my beta I think it needs more and so will not post it. Like, um, 20k more. I think I'm going to turn it into next year's BB.
Yay! More fic from you... even better, more long fic! Yay! Can't wait to hear about it! And OMG, I think you need to take away my exclamation points. LOL
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So fun and then sweet. Very nice for morning reading :D
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( damn, now i need cabin! fic)
xx
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My favorite parts:
A pout of Padalecki proportions was thrown his way. “Har-har. This is your not-so-subtle-way to tell me I’ve been on Twitter too much.”
“If the twit fits.”
and
He felt frustrated and slightly embarrassed and he’d be damned if he’d let on that he was feeling rejected for having a romantic idea.
and so much of this:
He’d spun his body away defensively but Jared’s strong grip was turning him back around. He pulled him deeper into the shadow of the alcove. Lips brushed his temple.
“I’m a selfish bastard, aren’t I?” Jensen murmured into Jared’s neck.
“Actually you’re not. You rarely ask for anything.” Jared pulled away and his eyes glowed a burnished gold in the dim light.
How'd you get so much delightfulness into 780 words?
Thanks for posting this!! :)
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Thanks as ever.
BTW ... this isn't the only prompt that caught my eye. I wrote something else but after discussion with my beta I think it needs more and so will not post it. Like, um, 20k more. I think I'm going to turn it into next year's BB.
I will email you more re this ;)
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